[Report This]Date: 05/29/2009 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 11
You naughty girl. You better not make us wait to long with that cliffie! lol
Loved it btw. =)
Author's Response: *giggles* Glad you loved it! Sorry about the cliffie lol, specially since the last chapter was a cliffie too! I won't make you readers wait.. too long lol. Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2009 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh, you evil wench! Stopping there was e-villll heehee That was some tasty smut though! Spike was so sweet, he was perfectly happy thinking she only wanted him to touch her :) And the way he wanted to make absolutely sure she was ready *dreamy sigh*
I loved the gentleness and heat they had during that scene -- I'm hoping the rest will be coming soon! ;) Loved it! *Smooches*
Author's Response: *BIG GRIN* You and Kitten are AWESOME!! Make me smile with your awesomeness lol. I am evil *cackles* heehee blame Kitten!! She said it was a good cliffie, I just went with it! haha *points at Kitten* I loved writing this scene too, I wanted it hott but sweet and the two smutt queens gave me the seal of approval, so I think I did my job! More coming soon, am feeling the inspiration! *smoochies* Luv ya, PB! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2009 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Well done *claps and cheers* you had better update soon! love how tender this was awwww
Author's Response: = D I am glad you liked!! I wanted Spike to be tender wth Buffy while Buffy is humping his face off ahah! Next up?: PANCAKES!! *snickers* luv ya, Kitten! Thanks for reviewing! *smooch*
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2009 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow! Great chapter! I'm really curious to see where there relationship goes outside of camp. =)
Author's Response: = ) I'm glad you are enjoying it! More will come soon! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
Glad Spike told Buffy about Dru. At least it's out in the open. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! More will come soon. Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 9
Forget it - I know what you mean. :D
HDW His Death Wish, you meant the other story. I wondered why there was no Angel bashing here in this one ;)
Author's Response: Oh hahaha. Nice. Yep no angel bashing in this one. If you have yahoo messenger, I just downloaded it for myself, you can add me if you like xochantelly Thanks for the second review lol. It will get a little bit angsty in this fic coming up, I promise.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
What does HDW means BTW?
Buffy took it well to hear about Dru. Maybe it was the fact that Spike wasn't in love with with Dru.
Enjoyed the update :)
Author's Response: HDW means His Death Wish. Short form for the other fic I have. And yeah, you got it right, she didn't take it hard because Spike is with her now and he was never in love with Dru. I am glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
:) I'm glad she didn't flip out on him! I liked how she tested him to see if it was really William. And it was so sweet how Spike remembered all of those little things heehee
*Smoochies*
*off to read next chapter*
Author's Response: I liked writing that part too. I am glad you liked it! *huggles* thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loved the update :)
The flashback was great (as they usually are). The shy William is just too cute.
Now I am hoping for a new chapter, and soon.. It's just too evil to end it there.
Author's Response: *giggles* I am glad you loved it! It took me forever to write this chapter! I am having troubles writing chapters for my WIPs But I had to get this one done for my friend Brittany. She loved it too! I like writing the flashbacks, making William and Elixabeth all innocent is so cute. I am glad you like the flashbacks. I will update soon, i knew a couple of people would hate the cliffie lol. sorry! Thanks for reviewing *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 10:05 am Title: Chapter 10
Love the ID bracelet :) Seems to me I recall getting one myself ;) Nicely done, update soon !
Author's Response: OMG! I totally forgot to give you credit! = ( I'm sorry, will edit now! Thanks for that too! I am glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing!! *smooch*
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter 10
Absolutely lovely! I was so happy to see an update. :)
Author's Response: = ) I was happy to write! I am glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing hun! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 9
Well, I'm glad that they worked out what happened 5 years ago, and I'm glad he told her the truth. Oh, and if you're in need of a beta, I'd be happy to help. My email is vagirljem@yahoo.com
=)
Author's Response: Awesome, will email you tomorrow! Thanks soo much and I am happy you like! Next chapter is up! *hugs* thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh! Can't wait to see what he says and how she reacts. I hope they work it out. They seem so sweet together.
Author's Response: - ) I am sooo glad you are enjoying! Next chapter is up! Thanks for reviewing, hope you like the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2009 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 9
That was fantastic!!! it's all sweet and innocent and I love it!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter (which I can already say for certain that I am going to love!!!) please update soon!
Author's Response: Update will be up within the next 5 days, i assure you! It will either be before or right on your birthday. I may have writers block, but I am DETERMINED to get at least one chapter up for you to read for your bday. Then, you will get another chapter of SJ for your bday, but it might be a bit late. I am soo glad you are loving the story! Means alot when a reader likes it = ) Thanks sooo much for reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2009 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooh He told her! Hope she isn't too pissed off lol
I keep using the words cute and sweet to describe the chapters - but it's true! heehee The stargazing and the 'practice kisses' were too cute! :D
*smooches*
Author's Response: Yup! He told her. I hope you like her reaction. I loved writing the practice kisses! I thought it was sweet and cute too!! Thanks sooo much for reviewing! *smoooch*
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2009 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww a picnic at their old place :) That was sweet!
Buffy's explanation of why she never told William how she felt was sad. They were just kids though, so it's understandable why they never got their shit together enough to talk it out before lol
Spike is digging himself in deeper by not telling her the truth - I have a feeling that Buffy ain't gonna be too pleased when she finds out he's really William. *bites nails*
*smooch* Loving the story!
Author's Response: I liked writing these chapters. The next chapters are going to get a little angsty tho! I like writing them as kids. So naive and cute lol. heehee gunna have to read the next chapters to find out how she reacts! I am so glad you are loving the story! Thanks for reviewing PB *huggles and smoochies*
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Very sweet! Buffy took what happened well. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: = ) I am glad you are liking it! I don't know when the next chapter will be up, I'm having some troubles getting started on the next chapter = ( But I will try my hardest to get one up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
It's a sweet story, very fluffy. If you'd like constructive criticism you can e-mail me and I'll give you some ideas on what might create some additional depth for the characters and plot. Otherwise I think I we just came full circle with their being reunited and in love, only the deflowering left to discover.
Author's Response: = ) I would like all the help I can get! Always room for improvement! I am glad you like the story tho! I will email you soon so you can help me out, which I am very appreciative for =D Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
Just read from the beginning to here, and awww I loved it, glad they found out who each other really was relatively quickly, they were so cute as kids together and they are all sweet and fluffy now :) looking forward to more
Author's Response: =D I am glad you are enjoying!! Thanks sooo much for reviewing = )
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww! *huge grin* Thank God she didn't freak out. So very sweet! Loved it. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! I was nervous about this chapter being too fluffy, but readers liked it! *smiles* Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter 9
Sounds as if William was a coward, not calling her. I never would have guessed he was in U.S.A. all the time. He could have called her but he didn't. I'm glad he told Buffy the truth even if he didn't knew how this would went.
I'm glad it went well. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter, i was nervous about it lol. ohh and just a warning... HDW is a little.. bloody in the next chapter im posting later... Angel bashing alot! just thought I would let ya know :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2009 - 07:22 am Title: Chapter 9
awww..so sweet!
Nice how Spike started to lie.. but told the truth after all.. Now that is all sorted.. What will happen next? I bet they will have a nice time.. ;)
What will Spike do about England? When will Buffy find out about it.. or will Spike actually tell her about it..
Loved the chapter :)
Author's Response: I am glad you loved it! I was nervous about it, i have never went that fluffy before lol. You will have to wait and find out about England! *giggles* Big plans for that twist = ) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2009 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Heehee "Balls". That was a great thing to end the chapter with! Made me giggle :D
Aww the way their friendship ended was sad! Poor William just wanted to dance with her. That big oaf Liam was pushing him around Grrrrr
The lunch tray getting accidentally dumped on Spike was funny! Your chapters always make me smile! *huggles*
Author's Response: Lol I loved addis 'Balls' at the end. I thought it was the perfect thing for him to think after chickening out of telling her Willima and blurting out that he liked her instead lol. Yeah, Liam is an idiot. *shakes fist at Liam* Lol I loved writing the part where Buffy scraped the potato salad off his chest with a fork while saying sorry lol. It made me laugh. I love that my chapters always make you giggle. That it what I am going for when I try to be funny! = D Thanks for reviewing! *smooch!*
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2009 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Just read all 8 chapters and i think it's really great, looking forward to reading more of this fic, good job!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! I am having so much fun writing this story = ) More will be coming soon, possibly tonight! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2009 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
If you want to hear that? "Good chapter, more please!"
It was fun when Buffy had Spike prove that he was really William. Interesting next chapter when he tries to explain why he left her....
I hope that he will talk to Buffy about the new ticket he got and what he wants to do (and that Buffy won't assume the worst without asking him first).
Author's Response: = ) You will have to wait and find out! I am glad you are liking my fics so far cordykitten! I always know that you are going to review and seeing your name up on my unanswered reviews always makes me smile! You are awesome!! Thank you sooo much for giving a new author a try, I know it was a bumbpy ride, but I'm trying to get better! Thanks soooo much for every single review you have given me and thank you for the reviews to come in advance! *hugs*
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