Date: 05/09/2009 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I have to say, I do understand Dawn's reaction. Not sure how Spike is going to fix this, but I hope it all works out in the end :)
Date: 05/06/2009 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG yay!!! I found this at Elysian Fields but it was only a oneshot or so it seemed. But when i found it here i was totally jazzed to see it had chapters!!! i really like this story cause it's totally twisted and hilarious (in a way) i get that now in the story theirs upsetness but it's a good plot. i'm all for it. go you!!! keep writing please :)
Date: 05/04/2009 - 07:22 am Title: Chapter 4
Argh! I have so many reviews to catch-up on, since I can't possibly use my work computer and home connections been wonky. I missed reviewing your other chapters...
No matter how hot things got between Buffy and Spike, no matter how much they've fallen for each other, what's special about your story is how VERY important Dawn is to both of them. The angst is well-driven--it's all for the love of a blue-eyed girl. Makes sense in an AU-kind of way. I'm very much enjoying your story.
Date: 05/01/2009 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter 4
the beginning was cute, but i knew the angst was coming. can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 05/01/2009 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter 4
What a sad turn of events. :( Can't wait to see where things go from here. Good update.
Date: 05/01/2009 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow...I never saw this happen...I mean of cause it would happen sooner or later...but not so soon.
I hope that they can fix it all...I really REALLY hope.
Nice chapter....wait for more
Date: 05/01/2009 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 4
:( Oh that was so sad!
I feel terrible for Dawn... But I don't want her messing up the Spuffy love lol I'm not sure how Spike could *possibly* make the situation any better, but I hope he can!
Date: 04/30/2009 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
I feel bad for everyone involved. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 04/30/2009 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooooo I wasn't expecting Dawn to find out so quickly. Awww must be hard on her as well as Buffy and Spike. Glad Spike is determined to keep both of them happy, just hope they will be. Great chapter, looking forward to more :-)
Date: 04/30/2009 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Uh-huh...sneaky Dawn. I fear she saw (found) something that belongs to Buffy.
Indeed...
Looking forward to find out if Spike finds a solution.
Date: 04/30/2009 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh man, that was sad. Poor Dawn, what a way to find out. Well, I guess it's better that it's out in the open now.Hopefully Spike will find a way to make things work.
Really good chappie, more soon please. :)
Date: 04/30/2009 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh damn that was a hell of a blow out. Now to pick up the pieces eh.
Date: 04/30/2009 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
sad chapter, i feel for all of them right now, hopefully it'll all work out.