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Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 9

Truly enjoyed it! I noticed "Revenant", so first read "Pinch Hitter" (that I'd somehow missed). Read those two, then most of your others... some I realized I'd read already (but read again, just for fun), some I did realize I'd already read (and had really liked--- were classic Spuffy fic!) and I wrapped it up reading this one. A great, joyfully ending romp--- with a few truths and true lessons thrown in for Spuffy and the Scoobies, and even us the readers! Gotta love it, when fic makes us *think*!!! Gotta rec this one from now on!
This would make a great stand-alone fantasy tale even if it weren't Spuffy/BtVS/AtS in any way.
Oh, and loved the way you portrayed the "magelettes"/our witches! Very Sweet. And Anya! Was great to see her bloom. Too bad Xander (and the end the other two stooges) "chose" to "portray" 'themselves' (with a li'l help from Dreamweaver, snicker) as such asses! Xander seems to rarely have an 'in-between'--- he is either a love, faithful, loyal, stalwart (but could get a dog to do *that*, snicker) OR he's a bigotted jackass (no libel intended toward jackasses, tho') with a motormouth problem, no cajones to back up his bullying (rarely, unless he's written as a sadist or pervy), living to belittle others/other beings to make himself seem better. But, herein, his persona worked, for him to learn a lesson the HARD way.
Thanks for a great read!
~~Kara

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I belong in your 2nd group about Xander - the one that sees him as a bigoted jackass. :D I was harder on him here than I usually am, to give Anya an even stronger reason than in canon to dump him. I like Anya and wanted her to have someone who really loves and values her for once. A couple of people really got mad about the way I depicted him, notably one long-time fanfic writer with many stories and fans to her credit. She told me on LJ that the story was bad from start to finish and that every single characterization was totally unbelievable. All stemming from the fact that she apparently is a Xander fan. It was a wonderful vindication when the story won Best Long at the Fang Fetish Awards! You're one of the most discerning reviewers I have and I'm so glad you liked the story and the characterizations! I'm hoping to end up published in the end and the Shifters are a major element in a whole original non-BtVS work.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 9

Everything falling into place so readily was bittersweet. On the one hand the gang will be headed home, but on the other there are two relationships that are coming to an end. The journey and the challenge were vivid and entertaining, and I enjoyed Rihar using Spike's trick against the pride lord.

The trip home was quick and relatively painless, but Rihar and Spike still being close to their lovers is a good sign. I hope.

Author's Response: It fitted somehow that Rihar would use Spike's trick. He learns fast, which is why he wants to see our dimension and how attached Anya might be to it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2008 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 9

You're posting earlier today :)) The earlier I can read.
Ah a pity, the negotiations were finished so early? The time gets short. Wow, and even shorter with the quicker traveling. No wonder Buffy and Spike aren't amused when their time together got cut short.
Oh... seems there is some distraction on the way.
LOL Perfume. Clever *gg* it worked like a charm to distract. Rihar did well to. When he stays open to new ideas and don't get lazy he'll do fine with his pride.
Unexpected turn again with Rihar coming with them. *me likes*
But for Buffy everything changes back to what it was. I wonder if she'll stand it to have it this way, thinking again a slayer has to suffer, live for her mission and not for herself. But Buffy is breaking that rule already, having friends.
Looking forward to more :)
PS - Congrat for your nomination.

Author's Response: Thank you! That nomination just blew me away because the story wasn't even completely posted! Wow! Buffy's starting to think. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: undead girl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2008 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 9

Again you have managed to create such an enthralling and sensual world. No wonder Buffy gave in. Wouldn't mind spending some time there...with Spike...oh! Rihar would be OK too for that matter *drool* - I do not see how Anya could be back to Xander honestly.

Author's Response: Oh, I agree! :D I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2008 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 9

This is turning into one of my favouretest Spuffy fics ever. You picked your nom-de-plume aptly, Dreamweaver! I wonder what's going to happen in Sunnydale, now that Rihar has come visiting? Xander has a harsh lesson coming, methinks! Also Buffy & Spike are in for it. Angel's going to do that smelling thing isn't he? Buffy & Spike's scent will be all over each other. I hope Joyce will be sympathetic... Oh, and Spike is going to miss the sun...

Author's Response: They've spent ta day traveling, the night unable to make love because they're in a crowd, and the next day at Rihar's new manor. So Angel thankfully doesn't have anything to pick up. But Spike is going to miss the sun! I'm so glad you like this! Thank you!

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2008 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter 9

I love this so much! Thanks for updating so often... xox

Author's Response: Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2008 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter 9

Interesting I love it and can't wait to see how Rihar adjusts to sunnydale. More please soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! More coming tomorrow.

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