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Reviewer: BuffyConvert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

I get a kick out of Spike and Anya conversations. Espcially when Buffy gets so MAD!!! Hey, Slayer, I think you have a Green-eyed Monster inside you. Does it fangs?

Author's Response: A little competition always helps. :D Buffy probably wishes she did have fangs!

Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2008 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Haha! "You do that." Awesome. Interesting new developments. I'm totally intrigued. And I love the way you're developing the tension between Buffy & Spike here. Nicely done.

Author's Response: The tension's what's fun to write. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2008 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 5

This new land is just as fascinating as the last, and you built unbelievable tension with the stalking panther. The fight scene was vividly choreographed and very exciting. I'm enjoying this new group, especially Serrai. She's really shining a light on the hypocrisy of the scoobies. They depend on Spike, but give him nothing in return. Buffy's anger and jealousy at the bite makes me think that should be changing soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for liking the scenes with the panther! I'm trying to learn how to write suspense and action. I'm so glad you think I've succeeded! And the Scoobies can be awful hypocrites and I wanted to suggest that.

Reviewer: LadyE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter 5

OOOoooOO...Buffy's jealous!

great chp!

Author's Response: That should make her think. :D

Reviewer: marta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5

Fantastic! A really fun read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5

I like this Serrai...has the hots for Spike.. and the Quenya controls big cats.. and what else?

Waiting to hear more..

Author's Response: Maybe having competition will wake Buffy up. :D Thank you for liking this!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lioslath noticed sooner what Spike did then Spike hoped *g*
Seems Buffy is already a bit 'bending'. At last she started to think. Xander is the only one that isn't happy about how things are developing, neither Spike becoming a part of the team, nor Anya's freedom. Instead of being happy for her like he should.
Guessed about the dragons but the big cat is far more dangerous for them if they can't leave the road and don't have the right weapons.
But wearing a collar. Pets indeed.
Ah... at last the cats won't be a problem now. Hopefully this twist will be good for them in the end.
Hehe... (Serrai argument that Spike got the wound for them and they had to give him blood. True.)
And Buffy found out that she's jealous... but she's not ready to confess to herself that's the feeling she has, being angry. And having a rival in Serrai. I hope she (Buffy) will get her head out of the sand (out of denial) before it's too late and she will feel only regrets.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! Buffy now has to think what she really wants, with Serrai around. And I got the action right *whew*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved this chapter , it was really exciting, love the descriptions of this wild and dangerous world..Liked the scene with Serrai , it was sexy and Buffy is sooo jealous *hehe* I liked the way Serrai reprimanded them for not feeding Spike after what he had done for them.Spike is really a hero here and they need to realize that! Can't wait for Serrai to attempt Spike! Wonder what Buffy will do?

Can't wait for tomorrows chappie, this is so GOOD ! =)

Author's Response: A rival might make Buffy think :D Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh how I love that jealous streak, more please soon.

Author's Response: Serrai's given her something to think about. :D More coming.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oooooh lovely long chapter!
Oh this is getting better and better. Everyone's character is being put under the microscope as happens naturally when you're stranded together in unfamiliar circumstances for an extended period. Xander is showing his whiney immaturity and callousness towards Anya (always hated that), Tara is showing her gentle caring self, Spike is showing his adaptability and loyalty, Anya's just being Anya (no side to her at all), Willow's feeling her way with the magic and learning to trust Spike, and Buffy is having her automatic dismissal of Spike's efforts shoved under her nose... and she's already comparing his attitude to the Scoobies' and consequently wishing it was just her & Spike! Love her jealousy regarding Serrai.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! Serrai's given her something to think about.

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