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Reviewer: BuffyConvert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love this demension; it is so cool. Really exciting when the Mage told Buffy she had been "taught strangely...how can you breath...with so little air?" And THEN he tried to get her to explain Spike. Which, of course, she could not!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you like this dimension! I'm trying to learn how to create believable alternate worlds. And someone had to make Buffy think and Lioslath seemed the right one.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2008 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

am really enjoying this tale! nice characterizations and cool setting!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

What an intriguing character you've created in Lioslath. His observations of the gang and their dynamic was entertaining and enlightening. I loved this capture of Buffy: "There are walls all around you. You exist within them, folding yourself to fit that small space. How can you breathe, constricted like that, with so little air?" Here's hoping she takes his advice and becomes more flexible and less judgmental. At least she's trying.

Author's Response: Someone had to break Buffy out of her narrow focus. Lioslath's a catalyst for all of them. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: undeadgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh dear...just brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: LadyE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 4

I love Lioslath ... he's so fascinating! Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted a different kind of wizard. I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Hopefully Buffy will open her eyes now and see Spike differently . Loved the conversations in this chapppie..
BOO Xander , God he's annoying ! Can't wait for the adventure to begin .
Great chapter,can't wait for more:D

Author's Response: Everybody's going to be learning something in this dimension. I'm so not a fan of Xander and I'm having fun kicking him around a bit here. Thank you so much for liking the story!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

Had to check the chapter out today :)
Interesting twist in this chapter; so they are found out now. At last this man (Lioslath) sounds as if he can help them (and that's way better then trying to kill them all).
Mmmm but things got a bit more difficult with the gate destroyed. *wonders if we'll meet dragons again (not really though, Lioslath didn't knew of them)*
Loved the support of Anya, showing her her strength. Xander didn't like it. But Anya was like Buffy when she thought it's her fault that something is wrong (reminded me because Buffy and her men leaving her, starting with her father).
Too bad they won't have Lioslath around when they are gone. He's good, organizing and all. And judging / helping too (Willow).
Seems his works did make Buffy think a bit (that can never hurt, huh?)
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I hoped Lioslath not knowing about dragons would let people know there wouldn't be any. I didn't want to repeat things. And Buffy really needs to start thinking! I'm so glad you like this! Thank you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh, I do like Lioslath! He's giving them a real wake-up call. I love the way he immediately understood Anya and tried to help her, while Xander resisted with all his might. He is so uncomfortable thinking about her true character!
I'm really looking forward to this road trip...

Author's Response: Xander always wants to forget what Anya was and keeps nagging at her. I hated that. I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you!

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