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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2012 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Six

Nice cliffie!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter Six

Can't stop sniffling, even though Edmund and Isobel are there now, still alive - undead. I have tears running down my cheeks, your writing and this story have shaken me so much.
*hugs*

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2008 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter Six

I hope that's Isobel. She got turned right? I was hoping she would. I love this!!!

Reviewer: satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2008 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Six

My word is "arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh?".

Sd

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2008 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter Six

OH I like how that chapter ended.

Reviewer: Moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Six

Great

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Six

absolutely love this story. the characters are wonderful and original. can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Six

Sorry I haven't kept up enough to review every chapter but i'm caught up now and I have to say this story is AMAZING!!!
I did wonder if you'd have him turn her but then the whole death thing was so well done I believed that was it, and she was gone - although I'm glad he did turn her.
I can't wait for more of this = Bout time Buffy came to her senses!!
Sarah
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Reviewer: Tee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 12:43 pm Title: Chapter Six

I am so loving your story!!!

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Six

First tears, then intrigue followed by bursts of YA! Wow.

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter Six

OMFG! They are alive!

I loved Spike and Buffy having a conversation and really can`t wait to see what Edmund is going to tell Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: Lluvia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter Six

Wow, so Edmund did really sired Isobel to save her, huh?
I eagerly await to the next.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 08:22 am Title: Chapter Six

she's alive!!! well undead at least. wonderful, absolutly wonderful really loved thois chapter and can't wait for more

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter Six

*sniff* That was a roller coaster. When Edmund came for Isobel to save her I was happy. Sad again because it was too late now :(
At last one good thing: Isobel could say goodbye to him and that she loved him. But what did Edmund do now, being alone again...
Spike 'translated' Buffy the dreams and still it wasn't enough for her (to believe?) and she is running again. Loved that Spike ran with her ;-) Good he never gives up.
Unexpected twist! Edmund. And even more surprise... can it be Isobel? I would be glad to know she's still alive (well kind of), still there with Edmund. *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter Six

It's Isobel with Edmund , isn't it?

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 07:28 am Title: Chapter Six

OMG this is so good. Edmund turned Isobel (surely that's the only possibility) so they could be together and they've been together for nearly 700 years - they got their happy ending. I can't see Buffy opting for Spike turning her but then again at this point in time she isn't about to die! Maybe she'd change her mind if she needed to. Daily updates - yippee.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter Six

Omigawd! I wasn't sure if I was seeing that one coming or not! But it looks like The Powers message WAS that an ancient Vampire (or two!) was coming to The Hellmouth after all!!!
Well played! Glad Isobel is still with Edmund! Although I have to say I think Spike would've felt a Master Vampire (or two) of that kind of age & strength coming miles away!
Til this point I wondered if we were going to discover that our two were the reincarnations of the lovers...or more specifically, that Isobel was Spike (well, actually either of them could have the brown hair, neither really being blond), but then that name is another form for Elizabeth, and that Edmund, with his green eyes, would be Buffy, eyes mirroring the soul and whatnot...but alas, you blew that theory right out of the water!
And you have hit on s theme that Joss so totally missed the chance to pursue---why did it never occur to him to tell a tale of a turned slayer? If fandom could come up with the idea, did it never occur to Joss??? It's the perfect chance to introduce a character, take her away, and maybe even give her back---something done so ofter in the Great One's 'verse, altho' more often he just lets us think he gave us something (unlike wonderful ff writers) just to jerk it back with the other hand!
At any rate, love, love, love what you're doing with this fic! Wish it were longer! You have a good feel for the flow of a period piece (and yeah, I think I picked out some historical inconsistencies, and yeah, it felt a lot more like a late 15th - early 16th c. theme than that of mid-14th c. somewhere (?) but still you've got good flow to the tale.
Thanks again,
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Reviewer: Trisha B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter Six

i was actually thinking about that happening before, but i wasn't sure if you were going to do it

great chapter

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter Six

Beautiful story!

By way of explanation; Twilight, a Novel by Stephenie Meyer. (www.stepheniemeyer.com) Her characters;
Edward Cullen; Bronze hair, naturally Green eyes, though Amber because he is a vampire.
Isabella Swan (Bella); His human love interest. Long dark hair, short, beautiful, pale.
Edmund and Isobel; very close.

Author's Response: That was a completely coincidence. I've never read those novels and don't know anything about them.

Reviewer: Reb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Six

Well, that was unexpected. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter Six

Well this should be interesting, please update soon, that would be a horrible cliff hanger to leave us haning. More please soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Six

Well that was a chapter filled with all different emotions from beginning to end. The idea of Isobel being lost to Edmund was just too sad, even though I was kind of bracing for it. And Spike trying to get her to figure out why she was having those dreams... duh! And now the possibility that they did get to have some kind of truly endless, eternal, 600-odd-year love affair. Well that's some kind of soaring hope. Looking forward to the next chapter! Fabulous story, just love looking at the Slayer/Vamp relationship in a completely unbiased way from some strangers I never knew before. Just love it.

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter Six

oh.my.god.

Reviewer: Rayna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Six

Ahh! You left it like THAT?! Lol. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. I will definitely be waiting not-so-patiently to read the next chapter. :D

Reviewer: trench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter Six

Well, well, well. There's a twist.

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