Date: 02/16/2008 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter Two
I hope Tara will manage to fix Spike soon! And Buffy has some major grovelling to do! Poor Spike...
~ Tanja ~
Date: 01/16/2008 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter Two
You actually had me LOL in a couple of spots on this 2nd chapter. Great story-line!
Date: 01/14/2008 - 05:44 am Title: Chapter Two
Love Buffy trying to figure out what it is she really wants. And poor Spike and his problem. Second chapters a winner, too.
Date: 01/13/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter Two
hahah, so funny to 'hear' spike say "she broke my penis!" Love this idea and the way it brings forth Suffyness--hopefully anyway. You're awesome and I can't wait for more.
Date: 01/12/2008 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter Two
Fantastic!!!! I absolutely love it - as always you have their voices down so well I can just see and hear everything like it's in the room with me!! Poor Spike!! I know it's probably not the way you're meant to feel but I do feel sorry for Buffy too - she was in such a bad place in Season 6 and she really didn't mean to hurt him and she's getting a wake up call. I'm just hoping she listens to it and she and Spike can move past her feeling bad and guilty about what they do and enjoy each other!!
More please asap!!
Sarah
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Date: 01/12/2008 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter Two
Well, at least now she's conflicted about what she wants. Like that Buffy fessed up and that they went to Tara to fix it. Hope Tara also offers some friendly advice to these 2!
Date: 01/12/2008 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter Two
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/12/2008 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter Two
Dangg....poor Spike!! Now's he's hurt, she's hurt...what's gonna happen to my favorite couple? Can't wait to find out!!!
Date: 01/11/2008 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Two
At last Buffy was honest about what he did even if Spike gave her a hard time. *no pun intended* Well it is her fault...
But even if Tara can fix them there is 'trouble in paradise' now... seems Spike not wanting her isn't what Buffy wants. ~ Looking forward to see what will come now. :) Enjoyed the update.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Two
As emotionally thought provoking as the chapter was, I still can't get past the whole Buffy broke Spike's penis. Still chuckling.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Two
Fabulously done! I'm glad Buffy decided to fess up, tho since she's a crappy liar and Spike's really good at reading her he'd figure it out in two seconds anyway. Everytime I read 'penis' and 'broken' in the same sentence I cracked up. And you did such a great job with Spike's reaction and him explaining to Buffy how turning to magic rather than him had hurt him so much. Excellent, looking forward to more!
Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Two
Maybe its just broken when it comes to Buffy? That would serve her right for messing with him like this. Hope he makes her suffer for this - what a bitka!!!
Its a really witty fic (as usual when written by you).
Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter Two
God, that was hilarious! "Broke my penis!" lol, i thought Spike was having an Anya moment but it was great! To be honest, I had thought at first, it was kind of going to be a fic with a very light plot, but you definitely have something in mind for this, so here am I hanging on a thread waiting breathlessly for your next update because you really surprised me in the end. I'm really looking forward to read where you bring this to.
cheers
mikim
Date: 01/11/2008 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Two
So glad they went to Tara instead of Willow. I always felt a bond between her and Spike
Date: 01/11/2008 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Two
Darn that girl! I'm counting on Tara to help out with more than fixing Spike. As she now knows about the two of them I hope she helps Buffy come to her senses. And B certainly has some groveling to do before she's forgiven, right?
XXX
Date: 01/11/2008 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter Two
That was brilliant and poor Spike. I can see him sitting there all dejected - just fab.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh I feel so sorry for Buffy, and Spike. She loves him but either doesn't know or won't admit it. I hope they can work everything out.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter Two
HAHAHA this is hilarious xD 'his penis is broken' oh gosh. despite the circumstances you still managed to squeeze in some spuffy cuteness, i love it!
can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter Two
Great chapter. Poor Spike, he has every right to make Buffy miserable. I mean some things you just don't risk!
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter Two
Lovin' it!
She's being all idiot-girl! 2 things a gal can't do (or get caught doing by the guy) a) breaking/hurting their dick and b) little dick jokes....guys just do NOT take these things well.
They think with those things...make vital (and often poor) decisions with them...they are more than physically attached to them! They even NAME them and refer to them personally! As evidenced by Spike saying
",,,except for the part wher HE does't work,,,"
And they talk to them!
I love the part where he thinks Buffy would probably just make it 'fall off' if she did another spell!
Good work, enjoying it so far, and looking forward to see where it goes from here. Thanks!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Date: 01/11/2008 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh Addie, you delicious author you! I can't wait to read more, more, more. Truly clever premise and you are ALWAYS so original. I know whenever I see your name on a story, I'm in for a real treat. More, ,,,,,please?
Date: 01/11/2008 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter Two
*crosses fingers* I hope Tara can fix it. You are without a doubt one of the best dialogue writers. I hope your muse continues to cooperate.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter Two
"His penis is broken."
oh wow!!! so freakin' funny!!!!!! lol. buffy is such a btich. sorry but i'm on one of my painful honesty trips. she actually thinks she can do a spell (intended to hurt him or not) and then decide (after it's blown up in her face) that she's going to make it up to spike.......wouldn't that defeat the whole purpose of the spell in the first place. she's going around in circles and expects spike to follow along with her. spike got some of his own back in this chapter. loved it sooo much. great job. more soon.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter Two
Very good I loved it and I can't wait to read more, I love how shes hurt he dosn't want her.
Date: 01/11/2008 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter Two
Very good! cant wait for more!