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Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Loved it! Sequel, YES!
I KNEW it! I KNEW it!!!!!!! Drusilla was BOUND to show up! Granted, you did much later than sooner, as I'd thought, but what a cliffie!
And I somehow thought Helen would've insisted on going back w/Xander to've helped w/nursing Spike while so seriously injured.
And yep, I always see Giles, somehow medically trained, almost like a Dr. or more like a Psychiatrist, but gone w/working for the Council, so not in practice.
It would explain his ability to help talk w/everryone in crisis, his usual understanding, and in your story his ability to administer and have that class of drugs and injectible/IV drugs on hand, and know which to use.
Drusilla---what a can of worms there! She smell some family nearby? Come to fix her "childe/not childe"? Or see her grandbaby?
Wondering if Angel shanshued too, after all?
'S HE off trotting in some bog, somewhere?
Somehow I really thought it would've been Dru---either that she'd have known via vision; or TI hunted her down to have on hand or in league w/him...hoping to cause a loss of soul. perhaps like a "School Hard" Spike was to Buffy...Or that she'd have just been there, found her way at the right time to take her boy and fix him...didn't figure an anonymous practically a fledge to sire him, and unknown even if he was an Aurelian byblow or descendant! Figures via many years and Masters he could have some A. blood in him, Angel et al of the Fanged Four making many a minion (supposedly Spike abstaining from childer). Just wondering how it would affect Spike and his demon to have an anonymous donor---wouldn't the demon be different? I could see Spike with his ironclad will maintaining and slipping right back into being a Master Vamp, but wondering about the vamp/demon being a different chip off a different not so old not Aurelian block, and how that'd work.
Very interesting that Willow was his partner in crime in this....always the sneaky girl. Gotta watch the quiet ones...she's a rebel...Oh, heard that someplace before!
Loved it, again, and thanks so for an enjoyable, enjoyable read! Angst, suspense, lovin', spuffiness and a cliffie! all rolled into one. Excellent!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! glad you liked it!! First five chaps of Dangerous are up. Vamp Spike in this is totally evil not like he was as we knew him, more Angelus type evil!! Tee hee! Will say there is no Angel in there!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

sequal yes please. loved the story, thought the vamping and returning to human thing was a really clever twist
thanks for sharing

Author's Response: First two chapters of Dangerous now posted. Let me know what you think!! I had fun making vamp Spike scare Willow!! Thanks for kind comments much appreciated :)

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Thank you for writing this story and all the updates. I enjoyed it tremendously. Is this your first? On to the sequel... and don't be afraid of making it longer... with more detailed accounts of their daily lives.

Author's Response: Yep that's my first! Kinda hurt when was getting roasted as it's my baby!! Tee hee!! Had only read one fic before I wrote it. Sequel is already done! Called Dangerous and will be up soon. But will be starting another soon and the point about more details of their daily lives is a good one. Thanks. Got another little fic written but it's Giles/Spike more than Spuffy even though she's in it from start but can't post it here. Also got idea of having Thomas the sexy vamp from Dresden Files head to SunnyD to woo Buffy much to Spike's horror! Could be fun!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Well, you pulled it off, what a great, different story. I really loved it. I admit, I had some misgivings during the first few chapters, but now after reading it in its entirety, I now see why you had to do what you did. It was a great twist to have Spike vamped again to become human. I did not see that coming.
I really hope to see a sequel on this. You left it completely wide open with the appearance of Drusilla. You just know that is going to go over well.
Loved it. Hope you continue writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Wrote it before I knew of Spuffy Realm so was pretty well roasted for having Helen around for so long but it's just the way it developed! Sequel is already written so will start posting soon. It's called Dangerous!! Thanks for saying you loved it! Cheered me up no end!:)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Hey! Bring ON that sequel!!!
Hell yeah we want it!
Don't'cha see us salivating, slobbering for it????
I've personally had such a hankering for post-Chosen and particularly post-NFA fics lately, and not just cos
Buffy the comic S/8 is out. I've been hitting sites and ferreting out bunches for future reads. (Those and time-travel Victorian tales).
And for MONSIEURRIPPER and other work vs reading fic challenged individuals....a TIP!!! Use the internet browser on your cell phone. Some phones do java and read true html (depends on how intricate and graphics heavy a site is I think, or how large) and you can go to sites straight on by typing in the web-address. However, I find that a lot of phones if not palm tops don't convert page size to fit the phone screen.
You can use the Google browser (Medianet if you have Cingular/AT&T) and actually switch from mobile browser to real Google if you look around on it, which will find your results better. Hunt up your fave sites, like TSR, BSV, EF, VK, AFF.net, FF.net, whatever, and bookmark them to favorites.
Then you can go back to your sites and read text only (usually will on newer phones fit the screen or give option to resize to fit, and show minimal graphics like banners and such, & you may have to fix it in your settings to allow graphics & java. Clear out cache/temp internet files & cookies often so it doesn't lock up.
Once you're checking your sites for updates you can bookmark interesting looking stories for future read, stories you're reading, where you left off in a story, etc.
Important tho', if you're gonna do this upgrade your phone plan to something like unlimited data use or something similar...when charged per Kb it is EXPENSIVE. My unltd; plan is an extra $20/mo, and for palmtops it's something like $44/mo. I've used it a lot over the last few months in my probs w/Dell fixing my laptop (had an overheating lemon---in general it's been down more than I've been able to use it.). So I at least got to read some fics via the phone browser. BTW, non-java enabled phones will not letcha read fics, usually those rated NC17 or R or AO that carry a pop-up warning---it just doesn't handle the pop-up window...once I got a new phone (right now a Samsung Sync) it was pretty smooth sailing on any fic & rating.
Just a tip for those wanting to cheat at work if cells allowed or to get in a bit of reading on lunchbreak, bathroom breaks, have boring jobs , etc....just to help ya get yer fic on.
Keeo 'em coming gal! Like I said, Yay! Sequel!!!!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Cool! thanks!! Will start posting it soon!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

See I knew Angi would come back ,and she's so happy now, yaay. I can't wait to read chaptes 20-28 ,but I have to wait til tonite ,have to do laundry,Grumble,grumble and cleaning ,blahh, but I can't wait this fic turned out so great even with the Helen debacle. BRING ON THE SEQUEL you have a reader in me.

Author's Response: okI I'll start posting the sequel soon! Must be sucker of punishment!! tee hee! It is Spuffy from start though so might not get quite so roasted!!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 8

i hate it when Giles does 'what he thinks is best' it always bites them in the bum....love the story. looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Well it's all up there now so readaway! don't forget to keep letting me know you still like it!! Poor Giles just can't help himself

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I just read all of this and I loved it to death.

That's an ominous little post script to the hapy ending you left us with.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!!! I have a sequel waiting if you're interested?

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Mabel, you´re the absolutely best for posting so swiftly. Thank you so much. And yes, you really made up for the beginning what with the babe and all the spuffy loving.
Sorry to read the last two lines, though. Spike revamped by some unknown twit and bound to some lackey as his sire? Ugh, hope it doesn´t come to that. Well I guess, it all went too well for a while, right? I hope Buffy kicks her ex´s ass to another dimension.

Author's Response: Finally sussed how to copy and past!! No Angi I'm bit worried about you so will give little spoiler, Spike goes through the mill a bit from now on! May have to change ratings! But happy ending guaranteed.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

I knew something like this was going to happen. You've really written a good plot. And updating with 10 chapters - I was in heaven.

I think there will be a lot more drama for Buffy and Spike to come. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Will post the rest today!! Let me know what you think at the end!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Sorry Mabel , but in my insane hatred of Helen (not really ,just don't somewhat like her) I didn't read everything she said and totally missed the line about rhe Immortal, your good, it never even occurred to me that it might be him. Can't wait for Spike and Buffy to kick his ass.

Author's Response: Got some gory stuff coming up!!! Watch out!!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Just read 10-19. You are doing an amazing job with this story. Do Xander and Helen possibly get together in this Story? Just a thought out of left field. I knew things were too smoothly and was just waiting for the bad to happen. Love the way you are writing the characters and your timing with everything. Looking forward to next update.

Author's Response: Cheers JT, not so far out of left field but you'd have to read sequel to find out!! Let me know after chap 28 if you want to!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I expected perhaps a jealous or more crazed than usual Drusilla, but not The Immortal to go after Spike...I thought TI was just a done deal, passing mentions...didn't know TI was a vamp or had vamps in tow working for him...that doesn't seem like something Buffy would tolerate/condone just for somebody who could throw the leg...!
OK, wow, unexpected (not so much that somebody would go after Spike, or Buffy, that's a given, even vamping him, but it to be TI and vamp minions threw me for a loop!) and boy, golly, you got my attention.
Figured Helen for vampmeal, just figured it'd be random in the hospital parking lot or somesuch. Didn't figure Spike would keep up a friendly relationship w/her either, that it'd be awkward. Now she's Xanderbait isn't she???
Hoping for more updates soon!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: Posting rest of story today, as for Helen + xander? You'll be needed to read sequel for that!! Tee Hee In Angel it never really said what The Immortal was so I've put him a demon not vampire.

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Holy crap. I just read 18 chapters in one sitting, and now I'm hungry.

But it was an awesome 18 chapters! I felt awful for Helen, but at the same time I wanted her out of the picture haha. Helen was a fantastic and likeable character.

I have to go to work, otherwise I would have read the 19th chapter too!

Anyways, awesome. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! nice to have such a positive review from someone who took story as a whole and didn't stress on the whole Helen thing! Let me know at end if you're interested in the sequel and I'll post it v quickly!

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

I have been reading this and around about the 10 or 11th chapter, I got totally sucked into this story.
Your writing style is pretty good. The idea of the story is excellent. I wasn't sure about reviewing in the beginning because it flow as well in the first few chapters but it's come along very well.
I can understand some people's reluctance to read this as most tend to want Spuffy right away and don't want to read about anyone especially Spike with anyone else, but I think you pulled it off. You might want to consider putting the summery that Spike is with someone else but just temporay. Just a thought.
Anyway, I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Cheers Shelly, that might not be a bad idea on this site but I hate giving out spoilers!! Posting last of it today! Got sequel to it but will only put it up if looks like it'll be enjoyed!! Tee hee!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Damn Mabel , everytjing was goin so well for them . I wonder who they wer I bet Dru sent them , I hope they don't turn him ,but Buffy will love him regardless, just another strife to go through. I just hope Helen doesn't make another appearance in their lives but I have a feeling their taking him to LA.

Author's Response: Sorry! There is mention of H but tnever back together ok? Spike's in big trouble!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

aww they named the baby Joy thats so cute , but what's happening in LA, I'll bet it's Dru, Huh , sick B-----.
I just hope nothing bad id going to happen now that Spike and Buffy are happy.

Author's Response: Was pleased with the Joy name thing though I say it myself! Close your eyes if you don't like nasties to happen to ..... well you'll soon see....!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

YESS they're pregnant how great is thatm I knew I could trust you Mabel your the bomb girl.

Author's Response: Thanks for hanging on in there. :)

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Is Angel back? Maybe with Dru?

Author's Response: Nope! Tee hee!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Angi it's okay you can come finish reading now it's safe , mabel came through and saved the day, honest, come back Angi , commeee baaccck.

Author's Response: Think i may have finished poor Angi off!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Just read up to chapter 14 AND YEEAH Helen gone ,Whhoo hooo, thank god and it was her idea to leave stupid chit realized she didn't stand a chance in hell. Now I can go and read the last chapters of Spuffy angst and goodness . This has been a great story the only thing I found wrong with it is that we had to endure 12 chapters of Spike /Other , thats alot Mabel, i have read Spike /other stories where he ends up with Buffy at but the other is over sooner than later this was dangerously close to being the Spike and Helen chronicles. you however are a very TALENTED WRITER and i look forward to reading more SPUFFY fics written by you.

Author's Response: Prob with this fic is I wrote it as a spike fic, which in my mind always ends up as Spuffy but needed to go through what I thought should have happened post season 5 Angel!! Will write next one with this site in mind and have them both in it from the start!

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Thanks for the updates!

Author's Response: It's my pleasure! Will do some more later before I go to bed!!

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Helen was sweet and you wrote her well but I'm glad she is gone... and of her free will, I was afraid the only way to get rid of her was death by vampire which would have added to Spike guilt. Great story... and generous portions but I'm still hungry for morw.

Author's Response: Hi Jan, thank you so much for taking the time to give a positive comment! It means so much! Didn't want to kill her off (though there's plenty who did I think!!LOL) My copy and pasting has come to an abrupt halt for some reason it will only repeat Chap 14 not the next one ! Will hand type Chap 15 and hope my friend can sort it tomorrow, we're only just over halfway through.! Thanks again for being so nice :) :)

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Please, someone kill me now, I can´t stand it any longer.
Madness, she´s gone to Rome again, and Spike is still betraying her with everything he does. Still no meeting.


Author's Response: by courtesy of copy and paste i hope your pain is soon over! ( It's called suspense!! Or torture in your case!!) I'm so sorry!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2007 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

I used the contact button next to your name on the < I think the authors page.

Author's Response: Haven't had email but somehow sussed it well at least until it keeps bringing up chap 14 instead of 15! I think I need a drinK!! Tee hee!!

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