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Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 08:35 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

loved this chapter too :) well done ..and I love the term yummy mummy *winks*

Reviewer: buffy25122003 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 01:48 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

a what and a huh to the lynyrd skynyrd lol love this fic

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 08:47 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Tara is still cute :) When Dawn and Willow were surprised to see the band there, that was fun. But they'll still have a hard time to convince Buffy. (What scars does she have?) ~ Till next time.

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 07:40 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Awesome! Loved it so far! You rock!

Reviewer: sexiespikelover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 07:18 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Keep it coming. I'm loving it.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Liked this sentence a lot:
'Brings a whole new meaning to the words yummy mummy' Spike thought smirking.

Reviewer: sasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 02:41 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

i don't want to be rude, but i would suggest getting a second beta to help you with this story. it's always good to have more than one, i saw way too many mistakes in this chapter, they tend to be a bit distracting. like you have a problem putting your when it should be you're, and to when it should be too. i think this is a good idea for a story, it just needs some work.

Author's Response: i have been trying to find a second beta and have sent 5 emails out to people that are on a beta list at the bloodshed verse but none of them have replied:(......Pet is having a crack at betaing this story for me...so hopefully when u read it again soon their will be some changes

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 12:17 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

I don't like to read fics that aren't finished and to be honest, I don't know why did I read your fic today. This first chapters were great. I loved how Spike connected with Tara right away and that Angel isn't so interested in Buffy. Can't wait to find out who violated Buffy and how. I hope she will go with the band and that she will take Tara too.
Please update soon!


Author's Response: sometimes half of the good fics r still in the process of being finished....i used to be like that until i found awesome ones that were half done lol

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 10:23 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

Ooh! Great job so far. And such a cute story. I loved it from the first chapter. I just had to read all the chapters even though I have lots of other stuff I should be doing. lol Thats how it always works though. I will definitely be looking forward to more.

Author's Response: lol yeah i should be doing assignments atm but i get distracted so easily....theirs so many awesome stories out there just waiting to be found lol...i'm glad your liking it.....another chapter should be up in a few days...week or so at max

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 10:22 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

Oh it was great, I wonder who Tara's father is and what all he did to Buffy.

Just every time I read this I keep thinking she is Willows Tara and going to sudden be kissing Willow and that stuff.

Author's Response: lol yeah its really weird writing Tara as a little girl but *shrug* she's a fun character to write.

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