Date: 11/03/2013 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm loving this story, but a few tiny little errors are bugging me. 1st, in chapter one, the word "morgue" is misspelled as "mourge." And then, in that chapter and many of the following ones, including this one, the word "too" (as in "excessive," like too much, too long, too hard, too bad, etc.) is misspelled as "to" (which should be used like, to run, to the store, to be, etc.).
Just wanted to let you know... I do love the story, and those have just jarred me a bit as I was reading.
Date: 11/14/2007 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 12
Darn that Cecily. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 11/13/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
You know, I think the main *squick*/problem I have with this story, is that Spike automatically takes Buffy to the bed he has sex with his wife in, and Buffy doesn't even care. I mean, yeah, adultery is wrong and sleeping with an underage girl is wrong and all that. But, mainly it's the just the bed /location thing that grosses me out. lol. You wouldn't wanna have Buffy say something about that would ya'? :P
Either way - I'm very much enjoying this and hope to see mroe soon! :)
Date: 11/13/2007 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
Good update but why is Spike staying with Cecily. He is really playing with fire now going to Buffy while she's in the house. Maybe he wants to get caught that way he doesn't have to make the decision to leave. Looking forward to more and have a good trip.
Date: 11/13/2007 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 12
God does he think of noone but himself , does he not realize that his way of thinking is going to hurt her, he's so dense. I hope they don't get caught now. He's really making me mad.
Date: 11/13/2007 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 12
wonderful update, poor buffy and spike, but could he please get rid of cecily, why on earth would he stay married
Date: 11/13/2007 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!