Date: 12/02/2011 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 4
I am liking this so far. I hope Buffy doesn't do anything stupid later like...sleep with Angel first.
Date: 01/14/2008 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
That was so hot! Is it warm in here or not? :-p Well done, sweetie! ;)
Date: 10/30/2007 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 4
oh I loved this chapter! Such a devious little plan of Buffy's. Going on to read more!
Date: 07/24/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hi, if I sound flamey, please forgive me, but have you read 'Older'?
IMHO, some parts of your fic so far sounded like exact rip-offs from the fic, but not that anyone can help it since it was one of the first and best of its type.
Whatever it is, I think the story seemed to be quite heavily influenced by Older and I think you might need to change the style a little, especially if you haven't read it(or based some ideas off it) so that people won't think of Older while reading your fic.
Nonetheless, I still enjoy your fic so far, as its well-written. Thanks for sharing :)
Date: 07/16/2007 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
nice job, Im really enjoying this story. Spike doesnt have a chance lol
Date: 07/16/2007 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter 4
loved this, love this story looking forward to more
Date: 07/16/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 4
I thought it was good! Definately write some more :)
Date: 07/16/2007 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The sex scene was hot. So looking forward to more
Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Dont delete it, your going great, it was good to read and has left me waiting for the next one ;)
Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
don't delete it! lol i think it was well written, specially for a first one. nice job n keep going with this, its really good.
Date: 07/15/2007 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
Don't be daft, you don't need to delete it at all. Please update soon I want to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was my first, so I was nervous. I'm just glad everyone liked it! I'm working on the next chapter and I'm hoping to have it out soon.
Date: 07/15/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
I liked it!! Sure wouldn't mind more!!!
Author's Response: There will be more to come in the next chapter, I swear. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 07/15/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying your story! You wrote the scene naturally and I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for feeding my muse! :)
Date: 07/15/2007 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, now things are starting to happen! Buffy seems pretty sure she'll get Spike's attention and she was right, she did! Wonder what's gonna happen now... Can't wait to find out! Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah she sure did get his attention. I mean what guy could resist the naked shower? Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 07/15/2007 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Are yu kidding , don't scrap it , it could have been a, Ahem , bit more descriptive , maybe u could work on that but otherwise I thought it was pretty hot, ahem . God I'm such a perv, no don't scrap it , keep up the good work. Next chapter please, whew.
Author's Response: Yeah it probably could have... I'll make sure the next one is more descriptive! And don't worry I'm a total perv, I love me some smut! Thanx!
Date: 07/15/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! You did a very good job on your first quasi sex scene.. The story is turning out nicely
Author's Response: Thanks! I was so nervous!