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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 03:26 pm Title: Part II

Loved the two chapters I just read, sorry I missed reviewing the last update. I'm so glad Fred decided to help Spike. And I like that Anne seems kinda mysterious, I wonder if she has special powers.

Author's Response: Anne's very, very special, in that way little kids tend to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 10:55 am Title: Part II

Thank you Anne for pulling him back, I can't wait for Buffy to find out he is back ghost or not.

Author's Response: She will, soon enough!

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 03:39 am Title: Part II

Yay Fred is my fave from the Angel show, so sweet!

Author's Response: Yeah, I liked her a lot. I just wish we could have had Fred AND Illyra without killing one..

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2007 - 05:22 am Title: Part I

or C) Angel's a hypocritical ASS

Author's Response: Oh, I thought that was implied by...well, Angel just being in the story, really ;)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 - 11:19 pm Title: Part I

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Part I

I think it is great, so the mating claim is back I wonder how long till the 4 meet again.
More please.

Author's Response: Won't draw it out too long. This series isn't given to a lot of angsty waiting.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 03:43 am Title: Part I

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent chapter. I think it would be so cool if Conner comes to confront Angel and because he is so angery with his dad he and spike become friends and he helps Spike. But it is your story so write what you want.

Author's Response: haha, I hadn't planned on writing Conner in; but I suppose I could write a bizzarro world version or something...hhhhmmmm

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2007 - 07:57 pm Title: Part I

Angel is indeed resentful / bears a grudge. He isn't happy that Spike is back (quite the contrary!) and won't let Spike call Buffy. What a pillock. Buffy will kick Angel's ass for that himself.
Too bad that Spike's trick didn't work with Angel (Harmony *gg*).
Good that their bond is working, giving Buffy a glimpse of Ghost-Spike and Spike the feeling as if Buffy had been there.

Author's Response: Yep, the all important Bond! (Not James...)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2007 - 06:39 pm Title: Part I

Angel's gonna hide it, cuz of the whole memory wipe he had done, PLUS your version seems even more grumpy then normal.

LOL

Get talking to Fred, Spike, or Lorne. They're your in.

Author's Response: See, as much as I like David Boreanaz...Angel's just a whiny jackass. And there's a reason for the extra dose of grump...

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 03:46 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Time

Great start! I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 02:48 am Title: Prologue: The Next Time

Love it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, first chapter is well on its way.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Time

Somehow I believe I read this at the end of the last story.
More please we need to find out how Spike is going to be coming back.


Author's Response: Yes, I posted this one as an epilogue/prologue. Sort of a test run to see what others thought/if they wanted to read it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Time

Looking definitely forward to more even when there is angst to come.

Author's Response: Not much angst, if I keep following the current direction my muse seems to be pointing me in.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2007 - 08:15 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Time

oh, tears. you made me cry. looking forward to more

Author's Response: Aw. I promise to make it better!!

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