Date: 01/05/2013 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very, very sweet fluffiness. Moves a bit too quick to be truly believable, but I enjoyed it!
Date: 07/10/2012 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Yes, it's me: Gabrielle. I came over to wander through your stories again and I happened on this one. It was a kick! Willow and her wonky magic... yet it was somehow perfectly right. This is super swell!
Date: 04/22/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great story line! I thought over all you did a great job, but it seemed you rushed the ending a little bit. This could easily have been a much longer story - where did the kids come from? Is there a Spuffy in the future who are missing their kids? What else happens with present day Spuffy? Just some questions, but overall great job!
Date: 04/21/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Willow did give herself away (her heartbeat). Hard to lie with a vampire.
Good to see they didn't send the children back. Hopefully you can post the sequel too.
Date: 04/21/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww, that was so sweet and as usual the sex was hot too.
Date: 04/21/2007 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad they didn't send the kids back. I liked this story. Great job!
Date: 04/21/2007 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 4
It was really very enjoyable. I loved how the story developed. I was a little worried about the possible outcome of the kids, but pleased at the end.
Date: 04/21/2007 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Wounderful and execellent story. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/20/2007 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh I love it, now after they decided to keep the twins it went alittle fast.