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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 06:45 pm Title: Part IV

Oh this is so good, does this spell mean that Buffy, Anya and Joyce will all be preganant and can't wait to see how the claim on Buffy will work.

Author's Response: We shall see, we shall see! :)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: Part IV

Gees Buffy can be so dense sometimes. Great chap. can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: Yeah, they both can. But it's kind of why we like them...it's fun getting them back together!!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:55 pm Title: Part IV

LOL!! I really shouldn't read this while at work... I'm trying so hard not to laugh! But it's just so funny! =D

And poor Spike... poor Buffy! They're the king and queen of miscommunication and misunderstanding each other. *sigh* lol.

Looking forward to more! =)

Author's Response: muwahaha! If your boss gets mad, tell him/her that I'll write something specifically for them, just so you can keep your job ;) And I'm actually going to address their inability to form a coherent, decent sentence in the next chapter...

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Part IV

OH! Giles and Joyce were in DAWN's room? Hilarious!!! I'm so glad Joyce is trying to rectify the situation. I can't wait for her to rope in Giles.

Can't blame Spike for leaving. How could he have known Buffy wouldn't want him to leave? All he sensed from her was negativity, and she didn't say a word. That rejection hurt more than any others he's had before.

And Anya might be pregnant after this....hee hee hee.....really have to marry her, now, in that case, Xan!!!

Gotta love Anya's endless demon knowledge.

Author's Response: heehee, yeah. You know, there's the whole cliche of doing it in your parents room...which Spuffy did. But your kids room? That's comedy! And I wouldn't make Anya marry Xander for any reason unless she really really really wanted to...

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:27 pm Title: Part IV

LMAO at the last line and ewww at Xander as a daddy

Author's Response: Yeah, well...Anya's an uber cool person, maybe she could save the child?

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 03:24 pm Title: Part IV

Great chapter! Everyone's reactions sure were interesting. Loved the mother/daughter talk between Joyce and Buffy. Can't wait to find out how the story ends! :D

Author's Response: Thanks. It's not going to be overly angsty, because I didn't want one of those. But I also didn't want sickening sunshine, puppies, and kittens either.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: Part III

oh love it what will happen when they find out what went on. more please/

Author's Response: Ha, you may be surprised. Perhaps.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 07:36 pm Title: Part III

Well done :D

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 07:28 pm Title: Part II

well done :)

Author's Response: Merci! Glad you're with me.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 07:16 pm Title: Part 1

Loved it :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad!

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 04:41 am Title: Part III

this just keeps getting better... i'm in love with this fic! please update soon!!!

Author's Response: aaawwww, thanks. It's a fun little thing I wrote during my classes. It felt good to do something productive.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 12:41 am Title: Part III

SQUEE!!! That was fantab!! Words cannot express how much I love this update! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: haha, well thanks.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 11:39 pm Title: Part III

Can't wait to read more! Loved it!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 11:25 pm Title: Part III

eeep!!! Dawn smashed the bottle! now what? do things go back to the way they were? cause things right now are pretty darn nice... :-) love all the hooking up that's going on, everything's perfect!

Author's Response: Questions, questions, questions. And I have answers!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 04:28 am Title: Part III

Excellent! Really enjoying this. Love how everyone is bitten by the love bug as well as reliving their teenage years! Nicely done. More please.

Author's Response: Yeah, what else would you do if you were turned back into a teenager? ;)

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 03:37 pm Title: Part 1

Love it, hope Dawn hasn't ruined all the fun.

Author's Response: Well. Maybe. But if she did, not for long.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 03:32 am Title: Part III

great chapter

Author's Response: thank you :)

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 01:38 am Title: Part III

here too. can't wait for the next chapter. more soon please. is the white light good or bad.

Author's Response: :) It's the white light. It's how people react after the light that's the big question.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 12:55 am Title: Part III

I loved the interactions between the different sets of couples. Willow and Tara's moony eyed flirting was so sweet, Anya's musings were hysterical, Buffy and William's love scene was hot and sweet, and Ripper and Joyce's scene was just plain fun. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Wonderful chapter! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 06:06 pm Title: Part III

Hah! Just googled: Spin the bottle is season four. Then I'm right! I never saw it. (Yeah, I should watch the DVDs. Only God knows when it will get aired here.)
And Dawn is the only one that is wondering what happened (that things aren't normal). No wonder if they used a magic bottle for their play :)
And you know what? If I read Anya verrry slowly I almost understand everything.But only almost. Anya will teach Xander *g* I bet he'll like that a lot :)
And I loved for sure the spuffy part: the demon feeling home in her blood, sees her as his. And he was mumbling words incoherently around the bite? I wonder if he claimed her... And Buffy brings out William in Spike too, speaking almost as reciting poetry. ~ Mmmh I thought first that breaking the bottle didn't bring anything but it seems something is happening now! Looking forward to more, I wonder if that helped to bring things back to normal :)

Author's Response: I've actually only seen parts of the episode myself. And you probably understand most of it, almost, because it's very wrong. lol

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Part III

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! William is soooo sweet and sexy and cute and sweet! Gah! Really can't wait to see what happens now that Dawn has broken the bottle. Good chapter! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, he's a cute one!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Part 1

Absolutely brilliant. Fascinating how Dawn is the only one who retains her memories correctly. Love the Giles/Joyce sexage and Anya's persistant pursuit of Xander and Xander giving in to Anya even though he hasn't got a clue what she's saying. As for Willow's babbling denial and the Hotness that is Buffy & Spike... perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next. Has Dawn fixed it all or made everything permanent... and which would be better? I just hope that when it's all resolved Buffy doesn't get all nasty and vengeful towards our poor Spike. Waiting impatiently for updates now...

Author's Response: Now would I do that? ha, yes. Yes I would. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Devin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Part III

Haha, this is hilarious!!! Anya speaking her first language is so funny, and William's accent... and yay for the Joyce/Giles sex! They are so full of UST (or not entirely resolved sexual tension, at least, haha). Update soon!

Author's Response: They're worse. They've had it, and then run for it. Silly characters and their unresolved issues.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: Part III

Wooo! There was claiming, and kinkiness all around! And Dawn saved the day....maybe.

I'm afraid of how Buffy will react once she's back to herself. They have a claim between them now, and Spike will be just heartbroken if she completely revolts.

I hope the group keeps their memories of this event. It's about time Giles and Joyce gave in to their attraction and made a go of it.

Author's Response: Yeah, I went for the trifecta. And I always thought a little Joyce-Giles actioin would have rocked.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:10 pm Title: Part III

This is fantastic fun!

The Willow babble-age at the start of this chapter was hilarous and I love the "first-time" POVs you've written.



Author's Response: ha, thanks. I thought they fit the different characters pretty well, you know? ;) lol

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