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Reviewer: BuffyFreak Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 - 01:35 am Title: Part V

WHAT!!!!!!!! pregant???? How can that happen, well yeah i know how but...just......WOW......anyways it was great all the way through, please write what happends next!

Author's Response: haha, well...crazy things happen when you're under spells. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 09:04 pm Title: Part V

Buffy is so insecure now... it took her four days to go after Spike. And the claim affects her even if she doesn't know it. Xander (the holy water) was fun *gg* (even if not for Buffy). Ah Giles got her a book so Buffy will know now what she got in.
And that was the reason Spike didn't show.
Good solution to open the link; no words that would lead to misunderstanding :)
Loved it! If I can vote? Epilogue and sequel. (Well your fault: you asked *ggg*. This was too much fun to see it end so soon. But your choice.)

Author's Response: lol, well, I've got the epilogue covered. I'm still thinking about a sequle. I want to finish twinlets first. At least, to the extent it can ever be 'finished.'

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: Part V

Great story. I love every min. of it! if you write more i will so be visiting your 'market'!

Author's Response: ha, well, I wrote a sequle, so there will be alittle more...

Reviewer: RandiGiles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 04:39 am Title: Part V

Ohhhhhhh Come on!!!!! I need more fall out! PLEASE! That was fantastic.

Author's Response: haha. I like your user name!

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 03:22 am Title: Part V

Like the fic, I really like teen Buffy. But does Buffy have a bun in the oven?

Author's Response: That's a good question...

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 01:38 am Title: Part V

I vote for an epi!

Author's Response: ok! LOL I've got something scheming in my head.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 01:35 am Title: Part V

Fantastic story! I wouldn't mind reading more. I'd love to find out what sexes the babies were, i'd also love to find out if Buffy got pregnant as well... so put me on the "do a epilogue list." Thanks for the fun read! :D

Author's Response: Haha, will do. Thankd for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 01:33 am Title: Part V

Funny ending, I think an epilogue covering marriages and babbies would be good.

Author's Response: Um, no marriage. marriage makes me feel queesy and ugh. But babies...I could do some babyness. We shall see!

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 12:44 am Title: Part V

so, everyone gets knocked up? does that mean buffy will be pregnant, too? i know spike's a vampire, but it was a spell so it could be possible. it would be great to see an epilogue, maybe find out if buffy's pregnant or not.

Author's Response: Well, Spike's a vampire. I don't know how I feel about a baby fic. We'll see.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 12:42 am Title: Part V

Jigga, huh? Oh, no way you're ending it with that cliffie, hon. Uh uh, you come right back and give us an epilogue.

This was fantab!!! I absolutely LOVE it!! And please, so not afraid to beg here, please give us an epi. I'd be forever grateful. *hugs* And if there's some more naked Spike in there, well, WOOHOO!!!

Author's Response: HA, of course there'd be more naked Spike. I wouldn't be cruel enough to not have naked Spike! And it will be fun, promise.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 12:26 am Title: Part V

Really loved this fic! Would love to read a sequel!

Author's Response: Hokay, duy noted! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Part V

Missed a chappy, but I caught up. Great story. Does this mean Spike and Buffy are preggo, too?

Author's Response: Thanks and...I don't know. Depends on how I feel later on :)

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Part V

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderfuly written. Very funny. Prefect characterization of everyone on the show. I hope you write a sequal please.

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you liked it. And we'll see. I need to figure out a good story before I start on a sequle.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:17 pm Title: Part V

No way can you stop here! I forbid it. Well, I can't really force you to do anything, but can I at least beg or something? At least do an epilogue? Please?

"It takes time to perfect that kind of disappointment and anger." I found that line highly amusing, hehe!

And no worries, I won't be fired. I just worry about disturbing everyone, it's a very quiet office. And as for my boss... he's very serious, not at all the type to read any kind of fanfic, lol. I can just imagine his face... LOL!

Author's Response: Begging is good. My muse likes begging ;) I'll write an epi, Ij ust have to figure out what I want it to say. And you know...maybe on "Boss Appreciation Day', you could commission something and then stop imagining what his face would look like! HAHA

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Part 1

I'm from sweden and I could understand most of what Anya was saying. It was really great, to read something that was almost Swedish :).. And I really like the beginning of this

Author's Response: Haha, Good! And you could probably only *almost* read it becuase it's probably NOT gramatically correct...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 07:46 pm Title: Part V

ewwwwww, pregnant Joyce!

Author's Response: What happened to ew Xander daddy? That so trumps preggo Joyce! lol

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 07:27 pm Title: Part V

Wasn't Buffy suppost to get pregnant too and how will Buffy take her mother and Giles having a baby. Love it need and Epi.

Author's Response: Never said Buffy was going to be pregnant. Dunno how I feel about making this a baby fic; we'll see when I get around to the epilogue,

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 06:44 pm Title: Part V

OMG! Joyce is pregnant???!!!! Whoa! Now Giles is fainting.

That's some spell! 2 pregnancies, a claiming, and what did Tara and Willow get?

That "stupid sod" line was perfect. And an Anya baby is going to be so cute!

This was so much fun.

Author's Response: Tara and Willow got...really good make up sex when it was over? LOL I'm glad you enjoyed this, it was great fun to write.

Reviewer: ajw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Part IV

I hope you're going to finish this one!

Author's Response: But of course! I don't like leaving things unfinished. Makes me itchy...

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 04:22 am Title: Part IV

teehee! that last bit was hilarious! And YAY for Joyce for talking some sense into Buffy...bummer that Spike left, but if I were him, I would have done the same, since Buffy would probably have turned on him eventually. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm glad you liked my twist of humor. And Joyce was always a cool headed chica...most of the time.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Part IV

Oh! It worked :) And now everybody has to deal with the aftereffects.
Buffy and Spike didn't notice the spell break first.. still very busy. ;-) And I was right, Spike indeed claimed her. Interesting spell indeed, and a fertility spell too?
Good that Joyce could explain something more to Buffy. So Spike interpreted her feelings wrong, she wanted to get consoled. ~ This was mostly fun (seeing Buffy and Spike so heartbroken not so much) but I'm looking forward to more / aka last chapter :)

Author's Response: Well...not wrong, exactly. And knowing Buffy and Spike, had he stayed, there would have been words that would have made this story longer than the 5 chapter limit I put on it. LOL

Reviewer: hotllipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 03:10 am Title: Part IV

Too funny! Looking forward to the conclusion.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, and I'll get it up soon!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 03:05 am Title: Part IV

"there's underweaqr on my lamp!" very nice touch! More please. I love where this seems to be going.

Author's Response: haha, I sniggered when I wrote that. A true, genuine snigger.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Part IV

Great chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Merci! :)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Part IV

Absolutely adored it!

Joyce's succinct observations of Buffy's thought process is fantastic.

Thank you for such a fun read.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm glad you like it, it was a fun write!

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