Date: 08/06/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Wow! Finally Liam has showed his true colors to Buffy. Poor William though, I don't see this going well for him. Let's hope Liam won't find out. I shudder to think what that bastard will do to him if he finds out. Great story! The angst is so delicious! : )
Date: 12/29/2006 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter Nine
great chapter :D
Date: 12/13/2006 - 06:20 am Title: Chapter Nine
wow addie you reallty captured angelus to a "T". this chapter touched me. i could feel buffy's emotion through your words.
Date: 12/12/2006 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Nine
holy shit, that was seriously intense. Liam is such a total asshole. I am so happy Buffy just let out his dirty laundry and everyone elses. That fucker, I can't believe he hit her. OH shit even more she seduced William. Great sex,but the consequences will be insane. Puts on seatbelt, I have a feeling we are in for a really really bumpy ride. Great update.
Date: 12/10/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Oooo, great chapter! Loved it!
Date: 12/10/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter Nine
Wow, I think I'm a bit nervous for both of them. I hope Liam doesn't find out. And Liam was going to the office my ass, we know he must have someone on the side.
Date: 12/09/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Being late.. thank god only one chapter :)
Saw your A/N. I try to write Liam all the time but I didn't eh.. draw the line on the dots(?) and saw Angelus. But that's right, that is more his character than Angel.
So Buffy was all on her own before (that's right, Liam was at work and ehe was sunbathing, alone). I didn't think she was lonely but indeed, she was alone. And she noticed herself that Liam treats her as a trophy wife, look there. And drunken Buffy told the truth.. Liam must be pissed off now. I wonder what consequences he'll make out of (because of) it. I don't count the hitting (well I hope it won't continue but we'll see).
Ahhhhh I wondered how it would happen the first time, William and Buffy. It was Liam's fault, he drove Buffy away.
Loved the update :) *second try to post*
Date: 12/08/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Nine
The drunken confrontation was everything I'd hoped for in revealing the cruelty of Liam, but Buffy seeking solace in William's arms has opened a real can of worms. You did a good job writing William's confusion and anxiety even as Buffy was making his dreams come true.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I don't know if IBuffy will want to wake up the next morning. It might be too much to handle being in bed with William and I mean that both ways.;)
Date: 12/07/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Uh oh...what's gonna happen now? I hope she doesn't stay with Liam...he's not good for her. Update soon please!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Wow - so many things to love about this chaper!
In particular, I liked how you pointed out Buffy thinkng "It had finally happened..." when Liam hit her. Just a few words, but so telling. Buffy has known somewhere inside for quite a while that the verbal abuse would escallate to physical abuse. I think this is whay she appears to quietly accept his violence - because maybe even from the start, she thought it was a foregone conclusion.
Also, I did like how you portrayed their first time together. Considering how messed up Buffy is, and how inexperienced William is, I thnk it would have been *very* out of character for them to have had a marathon shagging session with multiple orgasms flying about. I feel like Buffy needs to realze that no matter how incredibly hot and well-endowed William is, he's really just a kid.
I feel like this chapter advanced not only the plot, but the character development as well. Looking forward to more!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter Nine
I LOVE THIS FIC. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I'm going to go read everything you've ever written RIGHT NOW.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter Nine
Holy mother of...WOAH! This chapter was beyond amazing. I hope theres no angsty aftermath...
Date: 12/07/2006 - 10:12 am Title: Chapter Nine
yup, caught that. but i'm an angelus lover so i'm all over it,lol. still loving the story hun. can't wait for more.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter Nine
Wow...so good! Liam is a nasty piece of work and I really hope that Spike learns to stand up to him. And hitting Buffy...what a bastard! Anyways loved the Spuffy is this chapter - very hot! Look forward to the next update!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Nine
William is lost, Buffy is lost... and I don't know how any of them will react in the morning. I just hope Liam don't discover them just yet... I hope Buffy doesn't regret doing it, but she probably will because even if she's angry at Liam, she did it with his son... and poor William might have trouble to keep this a secret, seing as all his emotions are written on his face... it's getting very interesting.
Thanks for updating, I was very happy to find this new chapter this morning.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter Nine
love this chapter--- its so sad how angelus is treating her, but thankfully she has the loving william to comfort her.... excited for more!!!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter Nine
"He wasn't naïve enough to see this ending well, but he couldn't deny her something she needed nevertheless."--Forever our lovesick William. Despite the fact that there is much more trouble to come, I wonder if this event will bring our pair closer together or farther apart. Now they really have something to hide and I'm not sure our boy is yet strong enough to keep it from his father. Hope he figures out that maybe he will have to be the one to save his Buffy. I really am looking forward to more of this. Please, update soon.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Nine
loved it!!!! not all that suprised by angelus' behavior in this one. i mean he is an ass after all. lol.
i don't know if it was ur intention but as i was reading this i got the feeling that buffy and william's little roll in the sack wasn't about pleasure. to me it wasn't even about comfort. not that i'm complaining or anything. i just liked the way how you made it so the first time these two had sex, it wasn't all roses and stars. it was *real*. I was't expecting their first time to turn out that way. I was expecting it to be something like buffy taking her time with him or at least both of them getting off. again, i'm not complaining. i loved it. please post soon. great job.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Nine
Yeah, evil to the core. But arrrrgh, our William might be in over his head - no pun intended. Buffy is way messed-up and she might like him and appreciate his comforting presence, but this is not an emotionally safe situation for a very recently deflowered young man. Oy! I'll be ready for more.
Sd
Date: 12/07/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter Nine
Poor William - I loved the thoughts going through his mind. And Poor Buffy - she's finally starting to see the bad side of her husband and she didn't get off. I hope Liam doesn't find them already.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter Nine
Oh wow! Heads are gonna roll!
Date: 12/07/2006 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter Nine
Well then.
I didn't think it was possible to hate Liam any more than I already did. Yeah, so you proved me wrong.
I'd love to see this be the end of Buffy and Liam's marriage, but somehow I think that's not how you're going to take this. And logically, I don't think it can be. She has nothing; she's wholly dependent on him. Yay for her, though, for telling Liam how she feels ignored. And at least she didn't say anything at that point about her feelings/friendship/relationship with William. That would not have ended well (not that the resulting loss of William's virginity is going to end well, either).
I was pleasantly to see this posted today. I figured we'd be waiting a little longer, and I was all prepared to try to find something else to read. Great as always, Addie. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12/07/2006 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter Nine
They are so screwed....
Date: 12/07/2006 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Nine
It seems that Buffy has finally realized the extent of Liam's cruelty, and has taken action. I do hope that Liam does not find them in each other's arm's for fear of what he would do. I believe though that this is the straw that broke the camel's back, and the rose colored glasses have come off. so now I can't wait to see what happens next, grea chapter and thanks