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Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hmm it's almost like Dru is setting him up with Buffy to take her place. Wonder if you have planned to kill off Dru?

Author's Response: it's funny, because I've gotten that from people on SR a couple times, and I'm not entirely sure where it's coming from. good thought, but my old creative writing teacher always said the real challenge is to keep all your characters alive, so Dru will be living to a ripe old loopy age.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 6

That was an AMAZING chapter! And I don't just go dishing out capital letters for anyone. Really. It was so emotional, and I love how you compared his cigarette use to his addiction to Buffy. That was very well done. The characters are great, and every bit of this chapter was just packed with emotion and drama. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: aww thanks! capital letters! glad you enjoyed this chapter, it's such a crucial one. next chapter will be up any day now, just waiting for beta.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

I got your email. Thanks for letting me know there's a new chapter. Yippeee! So Spike's starting to get that loving feeling too, huh? Oh, yeah, things are not going to end well. Or it could, but not before he makes a complete and utter mess of things first, right?

Speaking of mess, who's been messing with you? Let me at 'em. *whips out the claws*




Author's Response: you're welcome :)

"Or it could, but not before he makes a complete and utter mess of things first, right?" <coughs> you're not wrong. in fact, look for that to happen very soon. <snickers> I'll be going back to weekend posts again, though this one may or may not be just a tad late, since my beta's got her hands full.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 6

Okay, now you've ruined it - making Dru all understanding and patient with Spike's little admission (just kidding - still love the tale) but now I'm really really intriqued as to how you are gonna put this all together. I'm cheering for a quick fatal illness that Dru knew about all along - I know, I know - you're not telling, but hey, if you've got me taking this storyline six different directions in my head then you are really doing a bang up job with the tale. And for the record --- I was smoking as many cigs as Spike was during the last chapter! Excellent update. more please!! LOVE IT, NEED IT, WANT IT!

Author's Response: thanks hun. I'm really grateful to all you guys that are hanging in there with me on this, since I know it isn't the usual fic on this site. but when I say I'm putting a lot of work into it, I mean...this requires more of me than everything else put together *g*

I have the feeling things with Dru aren't going to turn out the way folks think it will. except *coughcough* you're right, I'm not telling. I'm evil ;)

glad I'm keeping you guessing! I refuse to be responsible for your addiction ;) just teasing. I'm glad I'm keeping you on edge, even if that's mean. heheheh.

more soon! I have the feeling the next 2 chapters are going to make people want to rip my head off, but....hang in there with me, all will be revealed in good time :)

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

What can I say? Your turn, Spike...

"She wasn’t a toy to be brought out of the box when he felt like playing. She was young and tenderhearted": at last, but not least?

There is a french piece of theater called "On ne badine pas avec l'amour": "We do not banter with Love". It sums it all...

I can't help myself to think that it's only a beginning. Buffy suffers. Spike suffers. Dru... Hum... Can a person without heart suffer? Well, it seems to me that pain is unavoidable for each characters (except Dru, sorry ;)!)in this story. No way out.

But hope in the end? Buffy deserves it.

Dru. She is very understanding. Too understanding? Very suspect. Is it possible that she has had something in mind, since the beginning? (To blackmail his husband to have a perfect divorce?)

I'm curious. Good job :)!

Author's Response: yeah, it's his turn. he's finally getting the picture, a little. and yes, there will be a lot of suffering, thus the angst label. and maybe some hope in the end ;) you'll see. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 6

Excellent chapter!

It is sad to see Spike so confused, but I'm glad he's finally realizing his emotions. The kickboxing stuff was sweet.

It was weird how Dru was so understanding, but then again, she's Dru. ;-)

Looking forward to more!


~Eris~

Author's Response: so glad you enjoyed it! thanks!

yeah, Spike is finally getting the picture of the fact that he hasn't just been fucking her...well, ever, truthfully. there was always something else going on there. and to his credit, it's a pretty darn confusing situation. he never meant for this to go there.

yeah I liked the kickboxing turn of events myself. I had to throw the girl *some* kind of bone to keep her from going over the edge, poor thing.

Dru is Dru. she's nuts and kinda unpredictable. :)

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 6

So glad that Spike is finally emotionally involved, too. Buffy is too young, so I guess, there´ll be some pause somewhere. I wouldn´t be surprised if Dru had something serious going on elsewhere, too. It´s going to get really angsty, isn´t it? Can´t wait for your updates.

Author's Response: oh, there is going to be a little pause and a lot of angst! yes, Spike is finally in the game emotionally, but he's gonna fight that. as for Dru *coughs* I'm not talking. thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh wow, it seems it's going to end badly for Buffy. As much as I wished it wouldn't, it seems it will. I hope I'm wrong.
Update soon please!

Author's Response: I see you are caught up to the present. I think Buffy is going to go through some rough stuff, but I'm not telling the end. :) updates are once a week on the weekends. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter 6

Oooooh. It's a wreck just waiting to happen! It's like you can see a heap of vehicles approaching a crossroads from different directions and KNOW someone's gonna get seriously hurt. Unfortunately, my money's still on Buffy ~worriedly crosses her fingers for the girl~ More soon. Please.

Author's Response: heehee! I personally love train-wreck stories. they're not for everyone, I suppose.

as for the rest, I have a mind full of wicked designs...you'll have to see! thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Denise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 6

Definitely a"hot " story.! In the real world definitely do no condone open marrage & underage sex, but that's what fantasy is all about. I'm looking forward to see if Dru i going to be jealous &/or vindicative about Spike & Buffy or go in another direction althogether. I definitely do NOT want to see a threesome with Dru, so please don't go there. But I like the story- intruiguing & look forward to seeing where you take us. readers.

Author's Response: thanks! so glad you're enjoying it.

yeah, I don't condone it either. well, the pervy babysitter-fucking, anyway. I don't care whether people have open marriages or not. if people want to mess up their lives as adults, that's up to them, and if an open marriage works for them, kudos. but the kind of situation portrayed here with Buffy...it ain't right. but it's still hot.

there will be no threesome with Dru. or any kind of explicit sex involving Dru, of any kind. squick!

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter 6

i don't know what to think of this story

Author's Response: that's ok. sometimes I don't know how I feel about things I read too. you didn't give me much to go on, in terms of what you have reservations about, but I'm always open for a chat if you'd like. thanks for reading, anyway.

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 6

HES. WORRIED ABOUT HO BAG ,CHEATING DRU, OH COME ON WHO CARES . SHE DOES WHOMEVER SHE WANT.S AND THIS FOOL LOVES HER AND, YU KNOW WHAT, I MUST NOT BE A VERY PROGRESSIVE THINKER BECAUSE I JUST CAN,T BRING MYSELF TO CARE ABOUT THEIR MARRIAGE. SO THERE I WANT SPUFFY AND ONLY SPUFFY. HATE DRU , AND WHIKE IM AT HATE ANGELMTO AND DON,T EVEN START ME ON RILEY ! YEECH!.
THIS STORY BRINGING OUT LOT,S OF EMOTION IN ME, MOSTLY ANGRY ONE ,BUT I WILL STICK WITH IT, YUR A GREAT WRITER.

Author's Response: woah. hun. ok, first and foremost, thanks for the compliment to my writing. I appreciate that.

but dude, turn off the caps lock and take some blood pressure medication. you're stressin me out here, no joke. I appreciate that I hit a nerve, but I'm sure I'm gonna hit a few more before we're through, and I don't want you to drop dead. lol.

I kid, but seriously, tone down the invective, please. if you want to calmly discuss something you have an issue with, I think I've shown I'm open to that, but going off like that makes me feel kinda icky.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 6

igood update

Author's Response: thanks!

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