Date: 06/06/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
Hmm I think that if he had been fingered as a mutiner he would have ended up dead and not left on some island. Mutiny is probably one of the most serious things you can do on a ship back then.
I think that you should probably do some research into how life aboard a ship in that time period would be like. I can't really see a pirate ship just setting sail to cross the ocean over to Africa and to be honest the odds of coming across another ship I would think would be very slim indeed. As for the sailors getting drunk at night I find that hard to believe as well, I mean the crew has to be ready to fight or endure a storm at a moments notice and you can't really do that if half the crew are drunk off their asses.
Date: 05/11/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
I thought I had read it *scratches head* I'm not sure.. okay: So that's William's story. He told it at last. Mmm and William kissed Buffy. And because she kissed him back she's okay with it :)
Date: 05/01/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
Cute very cute, but the island part was a little walt disney like .. Nice story
Date: 05/01/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
Great chapter!
Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
loved it
Date: 04/30/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
So at last they talked,and kissed,now what??
Date: 04/30/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 7: Explain it to me
I enjoyed learning about Spike's past and i'm glad Spike finally told Buffy his story. Sweet ending to the chapter. Good update!