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Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter 34

Awwwww! How sweet. So glad she accepted his explanation. As long as they trust and love each other, they will be able to overcome the obstacles ahead. Right??? Can't wait to see what you have in store.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked that. And yes, you're very right and I agree with you wholeheartedly :D More to come on Tuesday or Wednesday. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 34

*sighs dreamily* Spike cut such a romantic figure in this chapter, his words of love were so swoon worthy. Now that I heard the theme song to Corazón salvaje I could just imagine the music swelling when Spike and Buffy kissed. *smiles* So thanks again for sharing it. I'm glad Spike and Buffy talked things out, cause Spike is right their battle to live happily ever after is just starting. No matter how painful it's gonna be I still think Spike should tell Buffy everything out his relationship with Aimée. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens when everyone finds out about Buffy and Spike. Fantastic chapter! :D

Author's Response: Awww, you're too sweet. I'm so glad you enjoyed his words (and the song). ;) I agree with you, Spike should tell Buffy, you never know how or when she might find out. ;) And everyone will find out about them in the next chapter. Thank you so much for your lovely words!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 34

Buffy really should have Spike tell her all this in front of Aimee. That way she can be absolutely sure without a shred of doubt that her love is sincere. If a note were to be given to Aimee to meet Spike and then have her find Spike and Buffy together to break the news to her, it would be good. So if Aimee wants to tell her sis that Spike popped her cork then it can all be aired out then. Who knows who might listen in if that happened.

Great chapter, thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Oh, he will tell her, don't worry about that. ;) Not yet, though. That's a cool idea, won't be exactly like that, but there's going to be a confrontation about that between the three of them.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 34

Man, why did Angel have to be so quick......I was hoping he'd miss and she'd fall on her buttocks.......I can't wait until she gets a ear and eye full of Spuffy goodness........me can't wait.......

Lovely words that William used to tell Buffy how much he loved and needed her........


More please

Author's Response: *lol* You're too funny. Although that would have been a good stitch. Oh, don't worry, Aimée will find out very soon about Spike and Buffy. ;)

I'm glad you liked his words there.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter 34

Now thats an apology!!!!!!...gotta love a romantic Spike...please update soon, I wonder what that Aimee has install for them?
Keep up the good work:)

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed romantic Spike. Oh, Aimée has lots in stall for them. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Zari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter 33

I LOVE IT!!! that was amazing!!! you're an extremely good writer. i can't wait for the next part. i know it'll be totally worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm very glad you're loving the story. :D

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 33

Little Aimée is so incredible ;)!

To be so sure that William came to Campo Real to steal her from Angel?

AAARRFFF :) ! Little girl has read too many fairy tales...

But let's recognize that after a such wedding night, Little Aimée has excuses to have such hopes.

At least, her first time with William was a good experience. Despite all the problems she met because of that. But sure that for her, her second time will stay as unforgettable as her first time, but definitively not for the same reasons...

Well, William plays lucky/unlucky here: yes his beloved Buffy is always single :), but she finds him with Aimée. Rather with Aimée all over him :(.

And Angel who cames precisely at this moment!

Drama and funny in the same time: Queen of cliffhangers you are! No need to say I wonder what William will do with Buffy, and Aimée... and Angel!

So strange that Buffy and Aimée think that each one is always second after the other. Aimée had always thought that she was second after Buffy for their family. And Buffy that she is always second after Aimée concerning men. Sisters...

Perfect job :)!

Author's Response: *lol* I guess Aimée prefers to live in her own fantasy world where everyone bows to her every whim. Not for long though. ;)

I think you're right, she won't be able to forget neither one of those experiences.

*lol* Sorry for the cliffhangers, but this portion of the story just begs for them. ;)

You'll find out soon enough what William will do with Buffy, and Aimée...and Angel! *weg*

Hmm, you know I hadn't noticed that about Aimée and Buffy and feeling like they're second best concerning the other, until you pointed it out. But yes, I agree with you.

Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 33

Is it wrong that I feel giddy that Aimée isn’t all that happy with Angel’s performance? lol… yet she’s still as stubborn as ever. It’s too bad she’ll realize too late that everything she went through really wasn’t worth it.
I said it before, Darla’s looking out, well, mostly for herself, but for her son too, and this is one time I’m totally with her on her plans, lol…
I kinda wish Angel would of stayed in the house, so it would be Aimée explaining to her sister why she was hugging Spike, and maybe in the process make a fool of herself but since that’s not the case, I’m just left to wonder what explanation she is going to give to her sister and husband, and what will Spike tell Buffy to make her see, he was there for her.
I also wonder what Angel’s gonna say to Spike and Buffy getting married when he seemed so set on marrying her to Riley.
I really can’t wait till the next chapter and for the story to continue :D

Author's Response: *lol* I guess considering how Aimée has behaved throughout the story, I would have been worried if you hadn't felt giddy. ;) ...Yes, she's quite stubborn, you have no idea how much, yet.

I agree with you about Darla, at least up to this point. ;)

Oh, don't worry, that conversation between Aimée and Buffy will happen very soon.

Angel, well, I think he won't have any say in Spike and Buffy's marriage once some things come to light.

Next chapter is up and just in time for your birthday, I know it's tomorrow, but I'm not sure if I'll have much time for anything then.
Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 33

June 20th is perfectly fine by me, that means it's only four days till Spike's "explanation" and Aimee's messing up said explanation. Fabulous chapter,

Author's Response: *lol* For Aimée trying to mess up the explanation, you'll have to wait a little bit. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 33

Wow! What an exciting chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I loved reading Spike's thoughts throughout the chapter, I especially the liked the little prayer he made. I am so loving the fact that Darla found out about Aimée's deception. Wonderful chapter! ~ I just finished listening to the song and I really enjoyed it, I found it to be very romantic. :D

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you found it exciting and that you liked reading his thoughts and the prayer. :D
Darla is going to be a powerful enemy against Aimée. It will be a battle of wills for them.
I'm ecstatic that you liked the song, it's been a favorite of mine for years. :D
Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 09:10 am Title: Chapter 33

okay very intense and I hope buffy will listen to Willaim and not draw too many conclusions. So Aimee wants an affair..........I hope buffy tells him everything and he knows what a liar aimee is. Angel probably will not suspect anything amiss.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and you'll find out very soon what Buffy will do. ;)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 33

Hmm a little short and the misunderstandings just keep on coming :)

Author's Response: *lol* Hee, misunderstandings are key for this story, so they'll just keep on coming! :) Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 33

Well looks like something nasty is getting ready to hit the fan..So now the miscommunication about Buffy has been cleared up.. but Buffy now thinks that Spike is there for Aimee'! Argg...I hope that is cleared up just as quickly..You can't blame Buffy for being a bit jealous, since she knows what happened between Aimee' and William..

Darla has some interesting info on Aimee's deceptions..Can't help but wonder what Angel is going to do when confronted..hmm..

Thanks for the translation of the Soap Opera theme song..I love how dramatic soap songs are...they crack me up! Looking forward to your next update : D

Author's Response: Hee, that particular misunderstanding will be cleared up soon, no worries. But there will be others that will surface soon. ;)

Oh, Angel's reaction will be a sight to behold.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 33

Oh the wicked slut sister had better be put in her place and good, LOL, ......Man this is one time I want Darla to be bad and make it good.......I feel for Angel, to find that the woman he thinks he loves was once his brother's bed companion, and is the true heir.....and that he is in fact the bastard son, so much heartache coming his way......I pray that Buffy has more faith then she knows in how much William/Spike loves her and can see the truth of what has happened.......and that God has listened to William's prayers......

Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry, when Darla decides to talk she will make it very good. ;)... About Angel, well, it won't be easy for him to face all that's coming and that's all I'll say about that...hee, you'll find out about Spike and Buffy in the next chapter. :D Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 33

Was it the custom at that time for the mother-in-law to check for virginity? Oh, and Aimee hanging on Spike. Grrrrr. Poor Buffy. Can't blame her for being upset. I hope William gets a chance to tell her the truth. What will Angel think. Did he see Aimee clinging to William? Wonder if Darla will spring the surprise on Angel the same day. For heaven's sake. I just thought. Don't want anything to ruin the relationship between William and Angel. What can I bribe your muse with to spped up things? Just love this story.

Author's Response: I think it was customary sometime that there had to be some proof that the girl was a virgin. It wasn't done exactly as I portrayed here, but I thought it will be another way of humiliating Aimée. I really don't think Darla will tell Angel so soon, she wants to savor the moment when Aimée falls from the grace of him and everyone else and the longer she waits the harder Aimée will fall. ;) Hmm, sorry I can't reassure you much regarding William and Angel, because it won't be easy for Angel to accept that his brother was his wife's first.

What can you bribe her with? *lol* At the moment, we just need more time to write, as soon as things slow down here I hope to go back to posting al least twice a week. Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter 33

Wow! This chapter really had so much in it that I demands a second read. I really enjoyed all the sequence of events going on here.

Aimee always hurting Buffy demands that she suffer for all the pain she has inflicted upon her sister.

Dona Darla also needs a comeuppance and she is not without her secrets herself.

I cannot imagine what the next chapter will hold because Buffy may be angry and hurt enough to not trust Spike. Though Angel wondering why his wife is throwing herself at another man would be intresting to see.

Loved reading the lyrics, thanks for sharing them.

Author's Response: Hee, yeah, I know it had quite a bit in it, but I needed to move the plot along. ;)

Aimée and Darla will get their comeuppance very soon.

Hope you like what happens in the next chapter and I'm very glad you liked the lyrics. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 33

It appears that the sh_t is going to hit the fan, more than one fan if fact. The next chapter it seems is going to bring on some nasties for Aimee, I believe the saying goes "payback is a bitch", but then so is Aimee. You do realize we are all waiting now with baited breath !! I can only hope that our sweet Buffy will listen to William, and she (Buffy) can be the smug one with her sister. Very tantalizing chapter, great job and thanks

Author's Response: *lol* You might be right about that, but not yet. There are a few things that have to happen before that. And you'll read more of Buffy's reaction on chapter 34. ;) Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 33

The cliffhanger is evil :-) Great story so far.

Author's Response: Hee! Sorry for that, but I couldn't help myself. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 32

Very cool. I´m happy that you put this part like que original. Nothing funny without William running to Campo Real for losing his fiancee. I really like that part. Oh, did you read the books? I´m reading they now, very romantic e much more angst than the novel. I hope my awful english don´t kill anyone. Write more fast, please.
Kiss

Author's Response: *lol* I just couldn't resist. It was too good not to use it, I just twisted things a bit so they would fit into my plot. I think I saw them online somewhere, but I haven't really had much time to read them. I should try soon, though, I'm sure they're awesome since Caridad Bravo Adams is an amazing writer. And your English isn't awful, I promise. I hope to post another chapter tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter 32

So what contraption and vial did Aimee receive? Is it something to make Angel bigger to not notice her lack of purity? Also with Riley sniffing around Buffy, will William think that she is playing the field while he was gone? Only you know the ansers, it is for me to wait and find out when you update next. Good chapter, excellent reading.

Author's Response: Hee, you'll find out the answers to your questions on the next 2 or 3 chapters, cariño. ;) I'll try to update tomorrow or as soon as I get the beta'd chapter back from my beta. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 32

Awww..Poor Spike. I am glad his first thought was there had to be some mistake even if on it's heels was a bit of panic. I imagine that the misunderstanding will be quickly cleared up..( I hope : )

Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeves next..How this unfolds from here on out should be pretty interesting! Thanks for another update : D

Author's Response: *lol* Well, I'll just say that that misunderstanding will be quickly cleared up. ;)

Hee, you'll find out soon enough what I have up my sleeves, seems muse is playing nice again and I'll be able to post tomorrow or wednesday, depending on when I get the chapter back from my beta. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter 32

No. NO!

*cries* Please, please say Spike will run off to campo real or giles will catch up!

Author's Response: Spike will run off to Campo Real. ;)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter 32

What has he done indeed…
It seems our favorite couple has another obstacle to face. Hope everything gets cleared up nice and proper.
Wonder what Darla is going to say when her husband’s son shows up at Campo Real especially when she finds out that he’s the new administrator :)
I can’t help but to feel bad for Angel. I just hope that when he finally finds out what kind of woman Aimée really is, he’s not in too deep to let her go.

Author's Response: lol
Oh, everything will get cleared up, at least sort of, soon. ;)
Oh, Darla's reaction is going to be very interesting and is probably coming on chapter 34, if characters behave and don't try to derail me away too much from the plot.
Angel, well, he will find out...eventually. And it won't be pretty.
Thanks for reviewing, cariño!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 32

Oh Giles, I think you just added some fuel to the fire that will ignite bitch sister's demise.........YAHOO!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for her, then Darla to be taken down......and the REAL Daddy I'm sure will be making an unexpected appearance in the near fututre...........feel sorry for GIles, for he would've made William a fine father figure and doted on him as if they were blood related.......

I hope bitch bride gets the night she never will forget, LOL, and not with fine memories to warm her when she thinks back on it, LOL......and I can't wait for her to find out that in the end......Buffy is the princess bride and Queen of the manor.......


Kimber

Author's Response: *lol* He certainly did, as his intervention accelerated some events. ;)

And you got the order right! ... And real daddy is returning soon. Doesn't mean that Giles won't still be another father figure for William though. ;)

Oh, you'll find out about Aimée and her wedding night very soon. ;) ... and the time when Aimée learns who William really is, is coming very soon.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh bring it on...cant wait for Willaim to arrive...things are really hotting up...please update soon and put us all out of our misery!!

Author's Response: Hee, it's coming soon, very soon. ;) I'll update as soon as I get the chapter back from my beta. :) Thanks for commenting!

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