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Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty

There is always a catch to these things, but for the time being all is right in the world. And the Guardian merely said the power of a slayer, not the live of one... So I suppose there are several reasons to be optimistic right about now. So very happy your muse has allowed this story to progress so quickly. Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty

omg i'm so glad she's not dead! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Emma's going to be just human again, huh?

Yay, they won!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty

poor emma!

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Another dastardly cliffhanger!!!! You tease, you! :-D

I really like the Emma/Aiden interaction in the first part. I think it's so so interesting whe these powerful, mystical being just act like regular boyfriends/girlfriends - it's kind of cute.

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh no... I know this particular story.... I'm truly excited which solution you will offer. Looks like bad trouble for our champions!

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Yay Emma! I'm wondering if I once knew what happened to her when she was a child, but I don't remember at the moment. Maybe I should read the story once more by the time it is finished... Well, things are moving on at the moment, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

A good time to admire wonderful Dawn... She's a true fighter, and I put my whole trust in her. Even if she doensn't know yet how to use her Key powers, she is going to make it through this battle. Buffy can be proud of her sister. .. :) Of course YOU made her this good, and so the honor is yours.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

That was too quick.. *sigh*
Oh good, Emma was successful and was able to get the others out. And even Aiden was worried about her more than one should have thought.. he really cares for Emma.
Oh oh oh.. that's bad. The ritual has already started, Dawn's blood it flowing. It was too late when it happened on that tower back then.
And again, a portal was open? Well they have Aiden now.. maybe together they are able to close it again, without letting Dawn (or Buffy) die...
Looking .. you know :) Till tomorrow! (hopefully). :))

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh good, Emma was successfull and was able to get the others out. And even Aiden was worried about her more than one should have thought.. he really cares for Emma.
Oh oh oh.. that's bad. The ritual has already started, Dawn's blood it flowing. It was too late when it happeneed on that tower back then.
And again, a portal was open? Well they have Aiden now.. maybe together they are able to close it again, without letting Dawn (or Buffy) die...
Looking .. you know :) Till tomorrow! (hopefully).

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

I'm glad Emma was able to successfully rescue everyone, i'm really worried now that the portal has been opened though. I look forward to finding out what happens next. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Nooo!!! I'm sooo sad buffy can't die again!!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

great update

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

eeek! how are they gonna get out of that?! this story is awesome!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Well this doesn't look good for our heroes. Though he's been quite clear that he needs all of her blood for this ritual, perhaps there is still a bit of hope. But right now, with only Dawn knowing that, I do wonder what will happen next. And I love Emma kicking a nice bit of demon ass. And Aiden's response to it. Guy can't lie afterall. Great chapter.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

EEEEP!!!!!! Oh no! How are they going to get out of it, this time?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Oh good.. I'm glad they tried first to go to Dawn; even better that they find her now (that the glamor didn't work for her). But that leaves to get back the amulet, right?
Argh.. bad. Seems as if Chalchicomehuel got them; hopefully Dawn won't believe him that they are dead. And it seems Emma doesn't want to stay put :)) ~ A daily update? Looking forward to it. You must be really busy :)

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I feel like I'm on a roller coaster going from dread and fear to elation and relief and back again in one chapter. Great chapter, very interesting, your writing just sucks me in.

Reviewer: A Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Hm... I like Emma :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 09:36 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

It's great to hear how productive your muse has become. Loved this action packed chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Oooh, where are Buffy, Aiden and Spike? I'm glad you're updating so quickly, with a cliffhanger like this...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

All this progress is very exciting, and something more to look forward to after my lovely 12 hour days. And your description of the Chachi guy as "a demonic lizard version of Mr. Burns" provides a very good visual. And Emma being able to focus her strength beyond that whole inner battle is quite awesome. Glad to see someone out for the fight. Hope she finds the others, too. Though I must wonder why Chachi would entrap such powerful beings behind crumbling stone walls. Does her merely underestimate them or is their escape part of his plan... Great chapter.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

cant wait for buffy and spike to reunite

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Dear lord girl do you ever sleep? I'm not complaining about getting updates but you are a writing machine. I am so glad that you write for my OTP because I don't want to share you with anyone.

I think Buffy can safely hand over the reigns to slayerdom into Emma's hands. She is more than capable.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

oh my gods....way to go emma!!! holy crap. where is everyone else? are they alive?? ack.........i can't wait for the next chapter....*sits on the edge of her seat*

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