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Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

You should see me do party tricks. OHHHHHH i sitll want an Aiden for christmas LOL. go Dawn kickn ass and taking names later .whooooo

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I just longged on and noticed that you have the rest of this story posted! I'm going to settle in with a cup of fresh coffee and have a really good time reading!

Also, go Dawnie!

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

A good time to admire wonderful Dawn... She's a true fighter, and I put my whole trust in her. Even if she doensn't know yet how to use her Key powers, she is going to make it through this battle. Buffy can be proud of her sister. .. :) Of course YOU made her this good, and so the honor is yours.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

HOLY CRAP.......dawn kicked some serious ass. and aiden..nice move with the cloaking spell! loved it and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Uh-huh... that looks really bad for Dawn. Krez is aloud to play with her? It seems as if her rescuers are near though will they be there in time? ~ OH! Dawn has learned something :) She was able to defend herself even she had to do it twice. Seems as if Dawn won :) And the others are in the castle now. Aiden wants to get the amulet first? I'll cross my fingers that their plan will function :)

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Go Dawn with the girl power! I thought it was awesome that she defended herself without having to be rescured by the posse. I'm so glad you're sticking with the story and continuing to fill in the blanks in your post Chosen-verse!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 07:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I loved the way Dawn handled herself with Krez. I also enjoyed Buffy's musings about the guards, and Aiden's little joke. Can't wait to find out what happens now that rescue party is in the castle. Great chapter!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Go dawn!! way to kick some ass!! I loved that!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Go, Dawnie!!! That training she's had really came in handy. Girl has grown up.

Aiden is cool.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Dawn got a good bit of even with Krez, and the rest have breached the castle. This seems like a very positive step toward averting another apocalypse. I enjoyed this chapter very much and am glad that your muse is back in business. Always looking forward to more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

great update

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

*claps* Go Dawnie! It is about time Dawn learned to protect herself instead of having to wait for other people to do it for her.

Reviewer: Satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ugg. Dawn had to saw off its head!! Yuk. I like the glimpse of whimsey in old Aiden. And the fuzzy hat reference was histerical!!

Sd

Reviewer: Chyril Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ohhh.. Getting really good.. Go Dawn.! I know you wanna finsih it..but it's so good..I hope it goes on.. I peeked at the banner.. Wow.. Very nice.. Thanks ADDIE...

Reviewer: A Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Glad Dawn had the guts (and brains) to get rid of that nasty Krez! Good luck with the finishing :)

Reviewer: Unholydragoon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Keep it up Addie! I like where the story is going and want very much for you to finish it.

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

haha, i love the end of this chapter!

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