Date: 10/07/2006 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
You should see me do party tricks. OHHHHHH i sitll want an Aiden for christmas LOL. go Dawn kickn ass and taking names later .whooooo
Date: 10/02/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I just longged on and noticed that you have the rest of this story posted! I'm going to settle in with a cup of fresh coffee and have a really good time reading!
Also, go Dawnie!
Date: 09/29/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
A good time to admire wonderful Dawn... She's a true fighter, and I put my whole trust in her. Even if she doensn't know yet how to use her Key powers, she is going to make it through this battle. Buffy can be proud of her sister. .. :) Of course YOU made her this good, and so the honor is yours.
Date: 09/28/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
HOLY CRAP.......dawn kicked some serious ass. and aiden..nice move with the cloaking spell! loved it and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09/27/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Uh-huh... that looks really bad for Dawn. Krez is aloud to play with her? It seems as if her rescuers are near though will they be there in time? ~ OH! Dawn has learned something :) She was able to defend herself even she had to do it twice. Seems as if Dawn won :) And the others are in the castle now. Aiden wants to get the amulet first? I'll cross my fingers that their plan will function :)
Date: 09/27/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Go Dawn with the girl power! I thought it was awesome that she defended herself without having to be rescured by the posse. I'm so glad you're sticking with the story and continuing to fill in the blanks in your post Chosen-verse!
Date: 09/27/2006 - 07:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I loved the way Dawn handled herself with Krez. I also enjoyed Buffy's musings about the guards, and Aiden's little joke. Can't wait to find out what happens now that rescue party is in the castle. Great chapter!
Date: 09/27/2006 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Go dawn!! way to kick some ass!! I loved that!
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Go, Dawnie!!! That training she's had really came in handy. Girl has grown up.
Aiden is cool.
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Dawn got a good bit of even with Krez, and the rest have breached the castle. This seems like a very positive step toward averting another apocalypse. I enjoyed this chapter very much and am glad that your muse is back in business. Always looking forward to more.
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
great update
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
*claps* Go Dawnie! It is about time Dawn learned to protect herself instead of having to wait for other people to do it for her.
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ugg. Dawn had to saw off its head!! Yuk. I like the glimpse of whimsey in old Aiden. And the fuzzy hat reference was histerical!!
Sd
Date: 09/27/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ohhh.. Getting really good.. Go Dawn.! I know you wanna finsih it..but it's so good..I hope it goes on.. I peeked at the banner.. Wow.. Very nice.. Thanks ADDIE...
Date: 09/27/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Glad Dawn had the guts (and brains) to get rid of that nasty Krez! Good luck with the finishing :)
Date: 09/27/2006 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Keep it up Addie! I like where the story is going and want very much for you to finish it.
Date: 09/27/2006 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
haha, i love the end of this chapter!