Date: 08/27/2006 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I feel like I'm being repetitive when I say how much I love your story.... seeing as how I say that about all of your stories. But the way I figure it, it's not so bad being repetitive when it's a positive repetitve. ;)
Date: 08/20/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter...loved Emma's reaction to Spike's reality. Philosophy Buffy is cool...though i am sure the girl just thinks too much sometimes. LOL keep this coming I love it
Date: 08/20/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
just read daylight and decided to try this one out too. i love it. i can't wait to see what happens next. more soon please
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
this is another one of my favorite stories right now. i love that emma knows that he was a vampire now. i was kinda wondering why no one had told her yet. lol. great chapter--can't wait for more!
Date: 08/19/2006 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I was so happy to find an update. And a good one, too. I just love Emma - even if she doesn't speak much, like in this chapter. I'd really like to learn more about her background...
What else... Oh yeah, I liked Aiden's explanation about Dawn or more Dawn as someone very powerful. This was a helpful chapter, it moved the story forward even with not much to happen. Seems as if the way to destination was the destination itself...*lol*
I'm hoping for another update and will be waiting patiently .. :)
Date: 08/19/2006 - 09:23 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I enjoyed the group conversation in this chapter. Fantastic update!
Date: 08/19/2006 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Buffy has a lot to worry too. Ah, Spike was carrying Dawn. I thought someone had to because they were moving again. It's good to see Dawn seems to be her old self. ~ Emma didn't know that Spike was a vampire? She didn't hear all the gossip then. Even Aiden heard of him well more about that he is the one he knows about (prophecy). *grins* And sure Spike isn't angry to know that a mate, another champion, was prophesied for him :-D ~ Loved the chapter, Addie. Your a good writer, never forget that if someone tries to tell you the opposite.
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
"Maybe she should ask Spike when she was going to get her parade, trombones and all."--A pleasant nod back to days gone by. And nods to worlds you've created, "All I ever heard them say where you were concerned was what a hottie you are and how it's so totally unfair that Buffy's got you all to herself."--Love them both. And more bonding over the weird things that happen in this world. A fabulous chapter. So glad to see you continuing with the chapter. It really is a fabulous tale. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 08/19/2006 - 02:44 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
great chapter
Date: 08/19/2006 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Nice to see an update.
That should clear confusion for the time being....
Date: 08/19/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
excellent chapter!
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Some cute dialogue in this one. Can't wait to see what's to come...
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Hey, I'd almost forgotten about this one. Nice to get an update. I'm liking Emma more and more with each chapter. Great original character if ever I read one!
Sd
Date: 08/18/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
It seems Aiden knows alot more about the prophesy, and maybe more about Dawn's abilities. It will be interesting to see. also anxious to see what else transpires between Aiden and Emma. I was glad that Emma was so accepting of all the revelatioons. Great job and thanks
Date: 08/18/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Stupid gossipy slayersettes, Buffy has earned the right to have Spike to her self and vice versa. I'm glad Emma is immune to the mantra of vampire=evil. I bet having an ancient glowing green ball of energy as a sister will turn out to come in handy. Not that I don't appreciate the action stuff but I hope we can also see more of Spike and Buffy enjoying the prospects of becoming parents with all the craziness of hormones, weird cravings, and perhaps some empathy symptoms.
Date: 08/18/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Another great update. Loved the dialogue.
-Alyx