Date: 07/20/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
oh oh I am so happy for this update. Sorry it took me forever to read it,but it's a bit hot to be sitting and reading. GREAT chapter. Ohhhhh Dawn being all energy girl rocked. I hope they are able to make it out the caves safely and get to where they are going. Awesome update as always.
Date: 07/19/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Buffy blithely reminiscing about the snakes she's defeated was a well placed comic spot in an otherwise dramatic chapter. "High school memories later, pet...snake hacking now..." made me laugh. This was another tight, action packed chapter.
Date: 07/16/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Damn, that was scary. Eww! Hate snakes! Great chapter.
Date: 07/15/2006 - 11:19 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Lucky me, there's a new chapter and I'm happy. :)
It was sooo typical Buffy when they had to fight the snakes and she spent her time talking about the snakes she has fought in her life yet... I really had to laugh out!
Second, Emma's worries are right - she doesn't know if Buffy really accepts what she did. Faith was mentioned, and I realized that I miss her quite a lot...
And Dawn..wow. It's somehow locigal that the Key hasn't disappeared after Glory. It's too meaningful to become just a story of 22 episodes... ;) Buffy also didn't lose her powers after she had killed her first vampire - so why should Dawn lose her Key powers, having opened just one door?
Keep it going, Addie...I know this one isn't one of your favourites, but it's good. And important. And it has Emma in it! :)
Date: 07/15/2006 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Dawn's keyness really came in handy in this chapter. I hope Spike is right and that Dawn wakes up soon. Great chapter!
Date: 07/15/2006 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Emma? I wonder indeed where her path will lay (will she be able to be together with Aiden? Things doesn't look promising). And the snakes? Inconvenient. Many too much to be good. Oh my! A good think that the Key has gone commando and did something. Save for now but a long way to go. ~ Till next part, enjoyed this one :)
Date: 07/15/2006 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Love that random unexplainable key magic creeping in there. Certainly adds another level to the story. Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Date: 07/15/2006 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Ooo, good stuff! Go Dawnie with the big magic.
Date: 07/15/2006 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
This is such a great story! Also, I think I forgot to leave in my review last time, that I would read a story about Emma. She's a great character, and I love the way you've made her fit into a story with Buffy. I think a story about her alone though would be very interesting.
Date: 07/15/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Wow...I didn't expect that! Update soon please!
Date: 07/15/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Hey! It's great to see an update on this fic. I really like Emma and Aiden. The attacks are just scary enough. I guess I'm jaded because I always know they'll figure out a way to defeat anything that comes their way. Green glowy Dawn is way cool!
Date: 07/14/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
great chapter
Date: 07/14/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
awesome!