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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Buffy finally having a clear slayer dream was a welcome relief. The exchange with The Guardian was well written, and I like this new piece to the slayer mythology. Emma's back story is tragic, but sharing with Buffy has to alleviate some of her guilt. This was another taut chapter.

I'm already enjoying Emma as an original character, and would be interested in a story focused on her.

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Oh heavens...This was hard. I'm totally with Emma. We all know how disgusting violence and violence against women is, so I don't need to state my point of view (moreover, there was the Calling which did its thing and so on). I understand her completely, and I'm glad that meanwhile Buffy doesn't regard her as a threat anymore. Personally, I'd love to read a story basing on Emma. She's an interesting character in this post-Buffyverse, and she really fits in. And I like her. :)

I'm looking forward to more! Thanks for the update. :)

Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Twelve

awwwh! that's sweet! sorry i'm reviewing so late. it took me FOREVER to have time to read this chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter Twelve

A little back story is always a good thing, and a whole back story would be wonderful. There's a reason why little Emma was locked in a closet, and those are seldom happy memories. Pretty nifty that you brought back the guardian of the scythe, too. I liked her when she was around the first time, even if she spole in riddles. And Emma and Buffy finally being able to share, can only be good for both of them. Great chapter.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Excellent writing. I felt Buffy's strength throughout & felt how little by little she was sharing it with Emma, even before they clasped hands. Loved it. I might be interested in a story mostly about Emma after this one culminates. She's turning into a strong character..

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter Twelve

I like how Buffy's Slayer dream moved the plot forward. Loved the Emma/Buffy interaction. Emma is such a strong character, i'm sure a story with her in the lead would be really interesting. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Twelve

always love your updates!!!

Reviewer: Satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 02:15 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Frankly, I 'm not sure about a story with Emma as the main character. But I would definitely give a go if you write it. This chapter moved things to a whole new level. I'm intrigued that Buffy has grown so much that she can see past what Emma did to Bobby.

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Ohhhh that was a nice chapter to get to some knowledge that is helping with the story line!! Great chapter!!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Oh the guardian..I liked her in the show. Ahhhh always consequences to magicks always. You did fabulous with the showing of emotions here. Having Buffy share how she has faced things in her past. Helping Emma come to terms with hers and start the healing. This was awesome. UMMM A billizon votes from me on Emma's story. so get writing LOL.....I am so hooked on this whole post chosen series you have going. It is all SO pliable and you keep the characters in check. You keep them as they were in the show and yet you bring them forward to show that they have grown. That they did go on. Ok so everyone needs to read Both Sides Now on your website...all of you go forth and READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I'm glad you brought up something like this, for there had to be consequences of Buffy and Willow doing that spell. Every girl out there would be completely clueless to what was going on.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Wow, I'm glad Buffy's helping Emma. Update soon please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Mmm Slayer dream and the guardian is back. I wonder if it is important who the child was. Yep, it was; it was Emma. She has indeed a lot to bear. But think too she didn't knew what she did because she had at once so much power. Loved the interaction between Buffy and Emma, how Buffy tried to help her. ~ About a story with Emma? I would be interested, but I don't have so much time to read other stories too so I would wait till I would find that time (*points to your Dawn/Andrew story. It's the same problem here*) ~ Loved the chapter, looking forward to the next one :)

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Great chapter. I'd like to read a story about Emma, it could be really interesting.

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