Date: 06/19/2006 - 11:37 am Title: Chapter Eleven
See? You can write it, and you can write it well. :)
For two reasons I liked this chapter very much - firstly, I'm addicted to dramatic meetings, and you fed my needs by letting Spike become so angry with Dawn...*g* Again, these details are so awesome (which is my second reason) - for example when Dawn noticed Spike's anger by him not calling her Dawnie or Nibblet. Or the news we learned about Emma; her claustrophobia. The whole dialogue about the revelation of Dawn being the Key was fun reading as well. Great stuff! ;)
Date: 06/06/2006 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Always a delight to see this story updated. Love Dawn accepting mystical powers in her sleep and telling no one but Andrew, and Spike's reaction, so very him and priceless at the same time. I hope Emma can deal with her claustrophobia. Thats never any fun. Great chapter. Please, update soon!
Date: 06/05/2006 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Well, I'll have to read "Both Sides Now" because the key-power plotline will probably come up again here. I liked Spike and Buffy calling Dawn on withholding vital information. The idea that they're leading her right into the lion's den makes her omission even dumber.
Date: 06/05/2006 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Great update! I am reading Both Sides Now as well, and love the way you are weaving everything together!
Date: 06/04/2006 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter Eleven
oh oh oh oh this was good. Dawn's secret is out and things could and I am sure will get very interesting. Buffy worried over her child, Aiden worrying about having Emma around for awhile....fantastic update now more more more
Date: 06/04/2006 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Eleven
LOL. . . I performed a that-ectomy? Do I get physician's wages for said service? (I almost wrote the bad word there). . .
Nice update sweetie.
Date: 06/04/2006 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Great job Addie, it seems like the fates have much in store for all, and I must say I am quite interested in what prophecy this baby is about that so much power is going to be bestowed upon it. As always I look forward to the next chapter and thanks
Date: 06/04/2006 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Great update! I really enjoyed it.
Date: 06/03/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Love the chapter. Love it when Spike goes all big -brotherly on her! Please update again soon!
Date: 06/03/2006 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Thanks for the quick update, even two stories today. I haven't read your Dawn story yet, have to many Spuffy ones to read. Dawn forget to tell something important indeed. I wonder how Aiden and Emma will work out their relationship when the fight is over. Till the next chapter :)
Date: 06/03/2006 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I'd forgotten about Dawn getting Key stuff. Thanks.
Date: 06/03/2006 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven
lovin' it!
Date: 06/03/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Eleven
great chapter