Date: 03/26/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Four
Course I mean "God" not "got" *gg*
Date: 03/26/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Four
Thank got Buffy has become smart again! And wow! Where are they?? Great chapter, I like seeing that Dawn is so sensible, that´s really nice. Ok, I´ll go on reading.
Date: 01/27/2006 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Four
oh Buffy so tacts before she thinks. problme that. glad things are okay with them thoug. what happened at the end?
Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter Four
"...w ell, honestly I don't know what the hell she thinks right now, but it's not good. Or anywhere in the neighborhood or accurate."--Great quote, and there were so many more. Love the bit about hell and skis. I'm glad she appologized. Fabulous Dawn and her big understanding of how Buffy and Spike work. Great chapter, though I'm very interested in that bit of a cliffhanger ending. Great chapter.
Date: 10/02/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Four
wow... cliffhangers are evil, but I'll definatly be waiting to see what happens next. Great story, update soon!
Date: 09/29/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Four
Eeeeeeee! Evil cliffhanger! I like Emma. Well, actually I feel terribly sorry for her. I really like your Dawn.
Date: 09/28/2005 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh, I hope Dawn is right: She'll be taking him back in no time Oops. Buffy did come for Spike; I was very glad about it. I would have been very hardbreaking. And then: there was a loud crash and a flash of bright light, and the four occupants of the room were gone?? I hope you can update soon. Yeah, indeed: Evil cliffhanger here :) Nope, I didn't see that coming.
Date: 09/28/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter Four
I love the little details you put in each chapter - Spike knowing about Dawn having beer in her fridge highlighted his involvement in her business even though she's living in another apartment, nice job. The dialogue throughout this chapter flowed nicely, and I especially liked Dawn and Spike's reflections on Emma and Buffy. Thanks for having Buffy come to her senses so quickly. Jealousy demon or pregnancy amnesia had me giggling. I also liked that Spike was up front with Buffy about her hurtful behavior.
Date: 09/28/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter Four
But vague disclaimers are no one's friend and you must be beaten to death with a shovel for doing this to us again...
Author's Response: Well, I couldn't give away the plot...
Date: 09/28/2005 - 06:10 am Title: Chapter Four
good update and cliffhanger
Date: 09/28/2005 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter Four
Love this! Glad the Emma thing was resolved -- can't wait to see where they all poofed off to!
Date: 09/28/2005 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter Four
Oohhhhh update! Good really good. . . where'd they go?
Date: 09/28/2005 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter Four
EVIL EVIL cliffhanger...there will be beatings with Spike's LMAO. Excellent Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Does that really count as punishment? LOL
Date: 09/28/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Four
Aww, I really liked hearing everyone's point of view on the issue. Glad Buffy and Spike aren't *that* stubborn and got everything sorted out quickly. And it was really nice to see Dawn!! I like how you wrote her. =)
Date: 09/28/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Four
what did you do????!!!! oh this is getting good. REALLY GOOD!!!! post soon. great job.
Date: 09/27/2005 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Four
*blink* Wow, that was unexpected. You're mean, but you already knew that, right?
Date: 09/27/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Four
loved the way you handled this...............i can't wait to see where they go..................
Date: 09/27/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Four
Great chapter! I'm really happy Buffy and Spike kissed and made up. I really liked Dawn in this chapter. Exciting cliffhanger. Can't wait to find what's where they ended up.
Date: 09/27/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Four
Very disappointed in Spike here. He stayed at Dawn's even though Emma was there, and he has still to apologize for his insensitivity to Buffy's feelings and placing Emma's feelings first. He needs to explain to Buffy soon why Emma's feelings were more important to him at that time than Buffy's. (Even though there is no good explanation)
Author's Response: He stayed at Dawn's because he doesn't know anyone else there he can stay with. It's not like Emma's going to be sleeping the night there. Also, he hasn't had a chance to discuss anything with Buffy...flash of light, people disappearing. Give him a bit of a break.
Date: 09/27/2005 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Four
Glad Buffy and Spike finally made up and Buffy is no longer jealous of Emma. I really like her. She seems kinda like me. Except for the being pretty part. But what is with the flashing and vanishing? Hmm. Possibly the start of the story behind this story? Can't wait for more.