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Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Two

Chapter two. Great idea letting become Emma (by the way, that´s my most favourite name ^^) and Dawnie friends --well, unless she isn´t evil, but I don´t think so although you´ll never know, hm?
I have clear pictures in my mind about how everything there looks like, although there isn´t much description of the surrounding. Like these pictures, they give me a warm feeling :)

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2006 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Two

aw, sweet moments between them and she's really wacked, to think he would cheat on her, but she's very insecure and I can understand that.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter Two

I enjoy Emma, "I annoyed my way out of the dorms."--that sure made me laugh. And who doesn't know people like that. Seems like a good match for Dawn. And it's nice to see Buffy and Spike making up, not to say that their arguing isn't fun. A wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Missy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2005 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Two

Very nice chapter. Loved the spuffiness and jealous Buffy. Wonderful job.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter Two

Heehee, very cute banter. But oh no about Spike telling Emma about the baby. And I'm starting to disike her. =(

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Two

Buffy's jealousy was so cute. And Spike is sweet to try and get Dawn a friend.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter Two

Jealous, hormonal buffy is so silly. Sure glad Spike is so patient with her. Love it so far. Good character is emma. more please.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Two

I am really like this story. *laughs* at hormonal buffy. Gods I remember those days way to well. Excellent chapter keep it coming.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2005 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter Two

Emma was the loud slayer then. Mmm - is she the one to play a greater role in this story? A catalyst maybe? I wonder if Buffy has reasons to be jealous of Spike. Not because there is reason to be jealous - I mean if Emma is going to do something bad. And no, the chapter wasn't bad - it was good.

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Two

GREAT chapter!! I loved it (although I do adore all your stories)! Pregnant Buffy really amuses me :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Two

I thought Emma immediately coming clean to Dawn about Spike wanting them to be friends was forthright and funny. Buffy's bitchy jealousy was well written and amusing, too. These hormonal mood swings are wonderful plot fodder.

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter Two

Emma is a total winner. I love her. It's not often that you meet a truly wonderful OC in fanfic. Of course, the fabulously hot sex might have something to do with my enjoyment of the story.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Two

Didn't. Can I borrow Spike when you're done with him... :) spikespet2002@yahoo.com

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Two

no disappointment here ..............loved the chapter......very happy to see buffy and spike doing normal things,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hope dawn does have a friend now................

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter Two

More ! that's very good !

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Two

Definitely not disappointed, I like Emma. I think she's cool and she has a great style from what you described. Sorry to Spike though, but her taste in music sucks...lol! My dad listens to his music and that's just a bit too creepy for me. Everything else is good and I can see her and Dawn getting along. And if she doesn't go after other people's men, then she's definitely not like Faith, so I don't think Buffy has to worry. Great chapter and I'm anxiously awaiting the next one=)

Reviewer: juanita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter Two

ahhh, pregnancy hormones are always fun. good thing Spike knows exactly what to say to tame the beast. Loved it!

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter Two

great update! I like Emma, haha probably cause she's a punk chick, but whatever. Looking good so far

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter Two

Good update. Where are the rest of the Scoobies?

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Two

I'm glad Spike soothed Buffy's jealously. Great chapter I really liked the interaction between all the characters.

Reviewer: Golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter Two

Love everything so far, can't wait for more

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Two

Welll, I am a bit disappointed. I wanted nothing but mad crazy sex between Buffy and Spike. . and I got. . well, okay, so I got some mad crazy sex. Drat. I really can't complain can I? even if the baby doesn't have ears. . . LOL. . that was a funny line.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter Two

incredible chapter keep up the good work and please whatever you do dont let spike cheat on buffy

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) I usually don't put any spoilers out there for my fics, but I'll let you know right now that that will definitely not be happening. I could stand to read that, and I certainly wouldn't make anyone else either!

Author's Response: Er, should be "couldn't" stand there. Doh.

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