Date: 05/19/2005 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love the mutal attraction.
Date: 05/19/2005 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great storyline so far. I love the concept. I do have one criticism. Whe you use quotes, you don't always give direct credit to someone like "he said" or "Spike replied" and some of those quotes are a little hard to follow. Even if you would entirely seperate the quote from the text then it would be more clear. I'm not trying to be picky here. I think the story is fabulous and I can't wait to see what happens next. Plus, the demon attraction in this last chapter was amazing! I want more of that please :)
Date: 05/19/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow ... that was unexpected and cool. I wonder what happened there with Buffy and Spike. Can't wait to find out more. Love this story!!
Date: 05/19/2005 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
love it can't wait for more
Date: 05/19/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awe, loved the chapter. Seems as the new slayer demon has some power over the vamp demon (to attract the demon) :-))
Date: 05/19/2005 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
ooooh!! :D me want more.. what happened to them? i really wanna no what Buffy is :D LOL cya xx
Date: 05/19/2005 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
LOL Lovin' it! Looking forward to reading more