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Reviewer: Dragonfly_B Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2011 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter 14

It feels like Christmas every time I see an update! I'm loving this story SO much... even if the whole awkward kiss made me cringe. Poor Buffy!

Author's Response: Haha, I love you! :D I'm happy that you enjoy it so far. And you couldn't be more right about the awkwardness. lol If Buffy only knew Spike hardly minded. Thank you for the delightful review!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2011 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 14

Poor little innocent Buffy. I wonder how long she'll be able to stay away. Maybe staying away is a good thing, but boy is it more fun when they don't. I want him to figure out that she's reliving his life though dreams. I know that it will come, and that I have to be patient. Just love this and am already ready for more! Update soon!

Author's Response: She's rather embarassed and horrified at what she did, but then again, Spike didn't handle the situation as well as he could. We'll see who makes the first step. After all, it's no fun when they avoid each other. ;) And as you said yourself, Spike will figure the dreams out eventually. That should be interesting. I'm happy you love it so far and I promise more soon. :D Thank you for being made of win!!!

Reviewer: angelgirl10 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2011 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 14

Really love the depth you've given the characters. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :) Knowing you see the depth in the characters makes me very happy. More will be up soon!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2011 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 14

Really liked this!

Author's Response: *beams* Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2011 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

Heh - I was the same with coffee, didn't like it as a child.
So Spike is trying to get the book from the witch.
Buffy is having Spike's bruises, dreaming of him, huh?
They really had a bit of a chance to talk till Buffy took action.
:)
Enjoyed

Author's Response: Kids just don't like coffee, do they? I'm not much of a fan even now. :)
Yup, he's rather stubborn about it despite not succeeding.
Indeed. And it really freaks her out.
Hee... Buffy took action for sure. She wouldn't feel nearly as horrified about it if she knew Spike didn't mind at all. *g*
I'm happy you liked. :D Thank you for the yummy review!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2011 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 14

How sad for Buffy.. thinking that he is not drawn to her..
If they are dreams.. very vivid ones that leave foot impressions and rib damage..
See Spike is still trying to get the book from the Witch.. with majic no less. Waiting to see what is so important.
enjoyed..

Author's Response: She'd know better if she could read his mind. ;)
The dreams are stepping up the ante and manifest more physically. Poor Buffy is freaking out!
Oh yes, Spike is trying... and failing. lol But he's nothing if not persistent.
Thank you for being wonderful!!! :)

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2011 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 14

He really is a idiot, he knows how insercure she is. Despite the walls, I bet it is going to hit him later on at a really odd time.
Dang her Dad and Spike are thinking the same thing, he will break her heart. Now how true that is is another matter.
Now she is getting hurt in those dreams, she needs to tell her dad before something bad happens to her.
Ohh, yay first kiss. Let's just hope she doesn't say anything stupid to Ayna like wish.

Author's Response: Well, he doesn't see her in the same way she sees herself, so it doesn't always occur to him off the bat that she lacks so much self-confidence. But he'll feel bad for how he handled it, that's for sure.
Hank is worried and Spike is afraid that the past will repeat itself once again. We'll see. :)
Yup, she needs to do something about it before it gets worse.
Nope, no wishes, I can assure you of that. I don't want to take it in that direction. Hope you'll like it. :D Thank you for reviewing, lovely!!!

Reviewer: Kallin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2011 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

Love it!!

Author's Response: Awesome. Thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2011 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 13

I love how the real Spike is coming out now that they are getting to know each other. How subtle his attempt to ask her over. I wonder if he has realized that he misses her, and that maybe they need each other aside from this whole crazy situation. Our little cuddle buddies. :) And I do wonder a bit about Ellen, though I like that Buffy is trying so hard not to like her. At this point it is too early to tell if she is part of the conspiracy, but she is surely interesting. Fabulous dynamics all the way around. Update soon!

Author's Response: They both lower their defenses, more and more now that they're getting to know each other better. They don't even fully realise they're doign it. Spike just likes having her around and even though he knows of the potential danger in it, he just can't help it. Hee... I love that you called them cuddle bunnies! :) There is some interesting interaction between them in the next chapter, and I think you might like it. Oh, Buffy really doesn't want to like Ellen! lol She's not to keen on sharing her father's affection with anyone else, which is natural since it's been just the two of them for years. Glad you liked the chapter! :D Thank you for the terrific review!!! I promise more will be up soon.

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

Forgot to sign in, so im posting my comment again :)

love your story so far and how their relationship is progressing. curious about ellen and if shes more then she seems. anya is always good for a laugh, vengeance demon maybe? keep it coming, i get so excited when i see an update!

Author's Response: Thank you again! Now I know who the lovely reader was. ;) I'm glad you're enjoying the updates!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

love your story so far and how their relationship is progressing. curious about ellen and if shes more then she seems. anya is always good for a laugh, vengeance demon maybe? keep it coming, i get so excited when i see an update!

Author's Response: I always love hearing that you're enjoying! :) The next chapter is full of Spuffy goodness, so I think you'll like it. Hmmm... Ellen. I guess we'll see if she's just a regular librarian or if she's got something more going for her. She is human though. Unlike Anya. ;) I promise more will be up soon. Thank you for reviewing, lovely reader!!! :D

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

So Ellen was visiting Hank. Wonder how she fits in with what's going on. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Ellen also has a role to play in this though she's unaware of it herself. More soon, promise. :) Thank you for being lovely!!!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 13

Say yes buffy

Author's Response: Hee... she shouldn, shoudn't she? ;) Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

I think hank was totally series about the shotgun.
Hmm, I got those clues about Anya, but is it to throw us off her real scent. I'm now wondering if you added those clues to make us think she is a veneage demon when she is something else. Tricky you.
If she is a venage demon, it seems like she is angling to make Buffy one too, or is that one my imangtion.

Author's Response: Haha, he really was!
Buffy won't be a vengance demon. That, I can assure you of. But I love how suspicious you are! ;) Anya is definitely not human, I think I can tell you that. She has an important role to play in the story, which we'll see more of in the future chapters. Thank you for being wonderful!!! :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter. It was funny hearing Buffy refer to Xander as Alex, I love that little touch. Sounds like Anya might be a vengeance demon in your story, or is that a red herring? I love the juxtaposition of her worldliness with Buffy's age-appropriate insecurity. Beautifully done.

Also, if you want to bounce ideas off of me to help with the writers' block, e-mail me.

Author's Response: Hee... well, Buffy wouldn't know how friends call him, would she? You wouldn't believe how weird it felt for her to call him Alex when I was writing it. lol The wish thing was a hint, so I can tell you Anya is not human. ;) I'm happy you like her!! I thought that Anya's bluntness to Buffy's naivete would be fun to write and I was right.

Thank you!! That's really nice of you. :) I might drop you an e-mail once I get my thoughts in order. lol

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

It's very hot here too but not 38°. We were happy not to get thunderstorms yesterday but who knows about today. It's rumbling...
*cookies for your muse* - or would (s)he like an ice?

It was fun 'watching' Anya go after Xander. He didn't complain. ;)

Ellen seems like a nice gal - sounds as if Buffy would like her in the long run.

Loved Buffy's and Spike's interaction too. All in all in short - enjoyed the update.


Author's Response: Oh, I love thunderstorms! I'd actually be thankful for one of those right now as it would make the heat subside for a bit. Hee... ice would be so much better right now! :D

Poor Xander. He had no idea what he's gotten himself into. lol But we know he won't mind. ;)

Buffy's determined not to like her, but I'm sure they'll find interests in common.

Happy to hear that. :D Thank you for the delightful review!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

Seems the shells they have built are slowing being torn down.. enjoying the development of their relationship
And Anya.. what's not to love.. and the "wish" ?
Helen.. still a mystery woman. Likes to cook.. well endowed... divorcee.. and librarian. The one Spike visited?
enjoyed..

Author's Response: A very good observation. Indeed, they are slowly revealing more about themselved and they don't even realise it. The next chapter is full of Spuffy goodness, so I think you'll like it.
I love Anya! She's a fun character. Hmm... the 'wish.' We'll see what comes off that.
Haha, I loved how you summed her up! :D I can assure you that Spike and her have never met before. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2011 - 08:58 am Title: Chapter 12

It always makes my day when you update:)! I loved this, and I loved seeing some of the walls come down / some REAL talking happen. Also, I have really love Buffys relationship with her dad in your story, it's a nice change from the norm.

Oh, in response to your comment, I did know Rana meant frog in spanish! It's resulted in a ton of frog paraphernalia having Been thrown my way :)

Author's Response: And it makes me day when you review! :D It's a wonderful circle, isn't it? So awesome you loved it. :) The cat's finally out of the bag where Spike having met Buffy before is concerned, though she's still unaware of the forgetting spell he put on her. And I'm very glad you like the Buffy/Hank stuff! I love writing it. :)
Hee... frogs are cute, so I'm sure you enjoyed the paraphernalia. ;) Thank you for the yummy review!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2011 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 12

You know, Spike is pretty good, he got out of that whole thing without ever telling her what he was up to. And try though they're not, they are letting each other in. And really, can we blame either party that he's putting a goofy smile on her face. Poor thing has pushed everyone away for her whole life and she finally has a beautiful man paying her mind who understands her, more than she even realizes. I like how he's trying to comfort her, even if he's not quite sure where the line is. And I do wonder about this Ellen, it is a mystery why all these new people are suddenly showing up. Not sure I trust her. Amazing. Update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, that's true! Spike's quite good at distracting Buffy and making her forget what she wanted from him in the first place. The connection between them is strengthening the more time they spend together and Spike is unable to keep away though he knows he should. As you said, he doesn't know where the line is. Hee... you don't trust Ellen, do you? Who knows what's up with her? *g* Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2011 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter 12

Really enjoying this story. Love the relationship between Buffy and her father, and the developing relationship between Buffy and Spike.

Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: I love hearing that! Especially since I find development of the relationships and the interactions very important.
More soon, promise! :) Thank you for the sweet review!!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2011 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 12

This was a very tender chapter. I like the interaction between the two, I like the way she pushes her way in.

Author's Response: I'm really happy you saw it that way. :) They're slowly breaching each other's boundaries and they don't even fully realise it. Thank you for the wonderful review!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2011 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 12

So Spike wasn't careful, huh? Buffy noticed the 'still'. But he had a good way distracting her.
The Buffy & Hank scene was fun.

Author's Response: His tongue slipped on that one and Buffy caught it, which is good because at least now she knows a bit more than she did before. Awesome that you liked Buffy&Hank! :D Thank you for being lovely!!!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2011 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 12

Loved it! Spike and Buffy are getting closer. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I love it when you love it! :D More is coming up very soon, promise. Thank you for reviewing, gorgeous!!! ;)

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2011 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 12

Love buffy spike closeness....Hmm ellen

Author's Response: Hmm Ellen indeed. *g* Thank you for delighting me with your review!!! :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2011 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 12

enjoying the updates..
A few truths from Spike.. him seeing her being cut.. But not that her mother died at his hands and not suicide..
They are getting closer.. Waiting to see what Spike has been up to.. all beaten up.
Ellen?

Author's Response: Always happy to hear that! :)
Buffy didn't ask, so he didn't tell. Not that he feels guilty, he just feels as if he failed at protecting Buffy. But they'll have to cross that particular bridge eventually. Truth always comes out.
He's been up to something all right. And who is Ellen? ;) Thank you for the lovely review!!!

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