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Reviewer: Weeza Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Silk or Lace?
Date: 07/29/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Silk or Lace?
I'm really hoping you update this. I am loving the spuffy scenes. I thought him putting on a dress for her amusement was hilarious.
Reviewer: saettie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:54 am Title: Silk or Lace?
Date: 03/07/2006 - 02:54 am Title: Silk or Lace?
HA! thats funny!! thats hillarious actually. and i agree w ya bout the dawn thing. i dont especially like her either. kinda a brat if u ask me.
Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 06:30 am Title: Silk or Lace?
Date: 02/01/2006 - 06:30 am Title: Silk or Lace?
lol funny story though i think your pauses are a little abrupt, i mean, when you change scenes and the dialogue,s you break them too abruptly, you need a bit more fluidity when telling your story, but other than that, i like it very much. it's just healthy critisism IMHO, just so you can make your story better ;) thanx, hope you update soon!!
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:34 am Title: Silk or Lace?
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:34 am Title: Silk or Lace?
good update