Date: 04/04/2015 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 73
But but but... Where's the rest of it...? :(
Date: 03/05/2014 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 73
Is that it? Good story
Date: 06/13/2012 - 09:14 am Title: Chapter 73
Good story, but long... probably could have split it into 3 stories & you'd have a trilogy! Still lots of typos (which, in some cases, still spell a word, so you need to check the vocab); you might want to have someone check it (again).
Also, another nit-pick: there are many instances of incorrect negative/positive statements (like it says "he tried to kill her several times over the years, but he just could do it" when it clearly should be "could not do it")... I could still tell from context, but it was confusing at first. There were really a lot of those.
Beyond the simple mechanics, I did like the story. I like a happy Spuffy tale where they figure out how to love each other, and I especially like how you didn't have to resort to making any of the friends (Xander, Willow or Angel) a villian like some stories do, but you still realistically showed them as flawed and complex characters who had to struggle with the idea of Spuffy before making peace. Also like that you could redeem Faith while she remains ambivalent... it's nuanced, in character for her and is so much more realistic than if she were suddenly totally good/loyal/humble/etc.
All in all, I really liked it... will there be more?? Feels like we need to meet the baby and see how they manage, at least at first. I mean, we haven't even learned Bitty Buffy's name yet!
Date: 06/13/2012 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 73
Good story, but long... probably could have split it into 3 stories & you'd have a trilogy! Still lots of typos (which, in some cases, still spell a word, so you need to check the vocab); you might want to have someone check it (again).
Also, another nit-pick: there are many instances of incorrect negative/positive statements (like it says "he tried to kill her several times over the years, but he just could do it" when it clearly should be "could not do it")... I could still tell from context, but it was confusing at first. There were really a lot of those.
Beyond the simple mechanics, I did like the story. I like a happy Spuffy tale where they figure out how to love each other, and I especially like how you didn't have to resort to making any of the friends (Xander, Willow or Angel) a villian like some stories do, but you still realistically showed them as flawed and complex characters who had to struggle with the idea of Spuffy before making peace. Also like that you could redeem Faith while she remains ambivalent... it's nuanced, in character for her and is so much more realistic than if she were suddenly totally good/loyal/humble/etc.
All in all, I really liked it... will there be more?? Feels like we need to meet the baby and see how they manage, at least at first. I mean, we haven't even learned Bitty Buffy's name yet!
Date: 01/18/2012 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 73
This was a wonderful story...but where's the rest?
Date: 01/03/2012 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 73
Came back for a re-read of this wonderful story. Still one of the best rewrites of season 6 out there. No updates for a year? I hope you haven't abandoned it......
Date: 12/20/2010 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter 73
Nice chapter.
Date: 12/19/2010 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 73
Uh-huh hope Buffy is really okay (because she said someone was at the door).
Looking forward to more.
Date: 12/18/2010 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 73
Thank God Buffy and Bitty Buffy are OK. Something fishys going on tho, Buffy heard something and then everything was blacK? Uh oh. That's worrisome.
I love caretaker daddy Spike...he's so adorable.:) I love their relationship, and can't wait for the birth.
Great chappie once again.:)
Date: 12/17/2010 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter 73
I was so excited to see that you updated that I had to reread the whole story. Yeah, that just took a couple days :)
Still just as fantastic as I remembered and I'm enjoying the new installments as well. I get the feeling that the "look within" prophecy hasn't exactly been squashed yet. Or that this is something new. Hm. Either way, looking forward to more!
Date: 12/15/2010 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 73
I like the chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
Date: 12/15/2010 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 73
So Buffy answered the door and everything just went black? Colour me suspicious... it's never that simple.