Date: 06/25/2010 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just finished reading the first chapter and I'm hungry for more!!! Love the way you write dialogue and the characters' feelings. It sounds very authentic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment. and taking the time to read and review.
Date: 04/29/2010 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm late but I got to it :)
Thank God Spike left Anya there! I was afraid I'd have to relive the whole thing and wasn't sure I could take it!
I didn't expect Buffy to be so honest or so determined! GO HER!
Great start, honey! The next chapter will have to wait a bit, but I'll get to it tomorrow :D
*huggles*
Author's Response: Sotia,
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. You have no idea how much I appreciate it. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Date: 04/19/2010 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start to this fic, so much better then the real ep, i always wished Spike had walked away from Anya and that seeing them kissing would bring Buffy to her senses. Off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewiing. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 04/14/2010 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Fingers crossed* that Buffy can repair that damage that she has caused.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I hope you like what I have planned.
Date: 04/14/2010 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi, you asked me to review so here I am :) ...Your story's really well written, I'll keep reading to see how AU it goes, but at the moment its very canon and thats not really my area (I'm a massive fan of the show but when it comes to fanfic I generally only write and read AU stories)...Theres a lot in here from the actual episode (like you said in your authors note) so I'm gonna keep reading until your writing really shines through a bit more and then give you a proper review! Really sorry I can't at the moment, but I wanted to leave something so you knew I'd read it...but I REALLY liked the beginning introspection of Buffy and Spike, the Spike bit was spot on I think...keep posting and I'll keep reading!
Author's Response: Rae,
Thanks for reading! You'll find it goes seriously AU from here on. I think you'll be pleased with the results. This Buffy is most definitely not canon. She's much more self aware.
Date: 04/14/2010 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1
i never quite understood buffy's feelings of betrayal. with the way she acted/thought you'd think she be glad spike was showering his affections to someone else. atleast in this fic she can admit, although very reluctantly, she has a teeny, tiny amount of non-hatred for him. but i'm still surprised she'd admit it to herself (the more) and even more surprised she'd admit it to her friends ...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. If you keep reading, you'll find a much more self-aware Buffy.