Date: 03/11/2007 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
So there's nothing Buffy can do, she'll have to go away? What a loving father she has.
Loved the chapter. It's good to see that Buffy found a new friend in Dawn even if she doesn't believe it yet. Loved the banter between Spike and Dawn too.
Date: 03/10/2007 - 08:22 am Title: Chapter 5
I can totally see them as brother and sister. Loved the chapter. I'm glad that Buffy and Dawn met. I was wondering when that was gonna happen, since it was kinda a given. Maybe she will even help get them together. Looking forward to more.
Date: 03/09/2007 - 09:52 am Title: Chapter 5
I really like the way you've written Dawn's character. For once she's sort of equal to Buffy and Spike in terms of intelligence and maturity, not just a whiney little brat. :)
Date: 03/09/2007 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 5
loving it still
Date: 03/09/2007 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter 5
aahh siblings, dont you just love them, great chapter!!!
Date: 03/09/2007 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Dawn sounds like she could become a good friend to Buffy. Too bad Hank is shipping her away! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 03/08/2007 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Please don't send Buffy to Scottland :( Loved it. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/08/2007 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
wonderful. i love the way you set up the future scenes
Date: 03/08/2007 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love this story! Dawn and Spike's interaction is great!
Date: 03/08/2007 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 03/08/2007 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
the siblings are really cute together. i can't wait for buffy and spike to talk again, hopefully spike convincing her that they belong together.