Date: 04/22/2008 - 10:51 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
If you were wondering, the restaurants name is pronounced as eee oh, with a slight pause between the syllables. Great chapter by the way!
Date: 03/28/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Hawaiian magic
“Good. That was my evil master plan: to make you happy.”--Loved that little bit. The whole chapter was a bunch of fun. Buffy digging deep into Spike's past. Such fun. Gotta wonder about Samara and the monster Carlita wants to raise. That sounds like much less fun. Loved the chapter.
Date: 02/16/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
Oh God... I'm nervous as hell... Carlita sounds like a bad job to me. Hope there's spuffy at the end though... that will placate me for a while. ;)
Update soon~!
Date: 01/25/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
keep up the good work
Date: 01/24/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
eeep and the plot keeps getting thicker...loved it!! please more soon!! thanx!!!
Date: 01/23/2006 - 11:02 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
Great chapter. sorry I didn't review sooner but I have been gone from the computer for 2 days.
Date: 01/23/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
I'm glad Buffy is happy now :) Uh-huh.. Carlita is ready to strike.
Date: 01/23/2006 - 02:14 am Title: Hawaiian magic
great chapter i love that buffy accepts spike. love the story and cant wait to see what carlita will do. cant wait to read more please update as soon as u can thanx.
Date: 01/23/2006 - 12:26 am Title: Hawaiian magic
being eaten doesn't sound too nice!
buffy and spike's date sounded so sweet!!
Date: 01/22/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
Another fine chapter. Leaves much suspense. Hope you update soon, 'cause my nerves will need it...tee hee.
Date: 01/22/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
i'm glad to see you're back... i missed this story. spike and buffy's first official date was very tender... he is so cute with his insecurity... and seeing buffy so caring about it is great. and carlita and the witch... uhmm...
Date: 01/22/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
I love the fact you did research- that shows dedication to a fic and accuracy. Very sweet chapter for Buffy and Spike- it's nice to see them have fun and be relaxed with each other. The Samara thing reminds me of "The Ring", so imagine my scary visual as I read the last part LOL Excellent update!
Author's Response: ROTFL You kick ass, Allison. I was wondering if people would get where I got the name from. Kind of the ring girl, with the cryptic child-like way River has of saying random stuff that actually makes send. Glad you got it. And research is important to me. Spuffy fanfic readers pay attention to details. They're smart cookies. So I try to do as much research for Aloha and PMJ as I can. I'm actually going to visit a prison next week for PMJ. My friend Shawn's mother is a warden! I just found out. Isn't it awesome?