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September 05 2005 - 05:17PM: NoneAnonymous
Oh yay, this is intriguing! I loved Cousin Arabella, so of course I couldn't wait until you finally put out a sequal. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

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September 05 2005 - 05:15PM: NoneAnonymous
Loved the first story, cant wait for more of this one!!

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September 05 2005 - 05:14PM: NoneAnonymous
oh oh.. she's back...... wonder what she'll do this time....

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September 05 2005 - 05:12PM: NoneAnonymous
can't wait to see what she has up her sleeve!

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September 05 2005 - 10:42AM: NoneAnonymous
Awesome story. But I'm so confused....

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September 05 2005 - 09:29AM: NoneAnonymous
loved this chapterspike knows dawnie is his daughter .dying to read what is going to happen next.hope you will add a nice long chapter soon .thanks great read more soon maggie

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September 05 2005 - 09:29AM: NoneAnonymous
LOVED THIS CHAPTER HOPE YOU PLAN TO ADD ANOTHER NICE LONG ONE SOON I HOPE WHEN DAWN SEES RILEY SHE DOES NT SLIP ANY THING ABOUT SPIKE .GREAT READ HOPE TO READ SOME MORE OF YOUR WRITING SOON,GREAT READ THANK YOU MAGGIE

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September 05 2005 - 09:28AM: NoneAnonymous
Ooh, wonder what Giles is going to say to Spike...great chapter, can't wait for more!

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September 05 2005 - 09:27AM: NoneAnonymous
Gotta love protective Spike. So, looks their building a family here...but not entirely aware of it yet ...more please!

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September 04 2005 - 10:45PM: NoneAnonymous
I'm not trying to be mean or anything here, I'm just trying to save everyone from the sort of thing I've seen turn into a legal mess in the past. You're too young to post this story. You're putting Pari and everyone on this site in jeopardy by posting a story of this nature when you're fifteen years old. This is the sort of thing that gets sites closed and web mistresses sued. It's illegal, and it puts Pari at a whole lot of risk. You need to take this down and repost in about three years...

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September 04 2005 - 08:00PM: NoneAnonymous
Strong chapter, where is this going?

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September 04 2005 - 05:45PM: NoneAnonymous
oooooh !!!! what a story !!! unfortunately you didn't write the next chapter !!! i hope you're planning on doing it because i can't wait : it's a really really really good story congratulations and see you soon i hope !!

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September 04 2005 - 05:04PM: NoneAnonymous
awww how cute, think its so nice that she is going to take care of dawn. errr im getting really mad that buffy keeps pushing her feelings away for spike. also i feel bad for spike becuz he loves her so much but shes with angel who he hates and she wont get with him. i really hope that they start getting closer to ach toher and get into a relationship again. i really hope taht dawn rings them together and fast and that they become a family. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next between buffy and spike. thanx

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September 04 2005 - 04:59PM: NoneAnonymous
I don't get Buffy, on the one hand she wants her distance from Spike and on the other hand she's plottting with him and consciously tempting him. I'm curious to find out what she is up to. Well done!

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September 04 2005 - 04:54PM: NoneAnonymous
Enjoying this one! Why do i suspect there's trouble on the horizon for our heroes??

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September 04 2005 - 04:52PM: NoneAnonymous
good update but i cant wait for them to get back together

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September 04 2005 - 12:36PM: NoneAnonymous
Et on sait bien ce qu'est ce nom... Pauvre Buffy--je m'en doutais bien qu'un malheur se passerait avec Joyce (ton petit avertissement de tristesse!). Tu as pu evoquer tres clairement la peine de Buffy, ainsi que de tous ses proches. J'espere que WIlliam perseverera et que Buffy pourra se pardonner. Au sujet du LJ, j'en serais ravie!! Partage l'information lorsque tu seras prete :)

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September 04 2005 - 12:32PM: NoneAnonymous
c'est une des rares fois ou une histoire me prend a la gorge et me donne envie d'hurler !! Quelle tristesse magnifique... Evidemment je m'attendais a une catastrophe mais là tu nous a bluffer ! William a très mal, et je ne sais pas si il va lui pardonner si facilement ce genre d'accusations douloureuses meme si c'était sous le coup de la peine et la culpabilité... Pour ça Buffy a toujours été très forte pour trouver un responsable a ses problèmes... Enfin tout ça pour dire que c'est un chapitre merveilleux que tu nous a écrit et que ça va etre très dur d'attendre la suite !!! PS : je veux absolument l'adresse du Live Journal pour les prochaines fics !!!

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September 04 2005 - 12:27PM: NoneAnonymous
Chapitre superbement écrit , bouleversant et intense. La découverte de Buffy du corps de sa mère m' a fait trés peur , et je suis soulagée que Joyce ne soit pour l'instant que dans le coma. Scene palpitante entre William et Buffy , leur chagrin était si pénible à lire.. Bravo.

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September 04 2005 - 12:23PM: NoneAnonymous
Ouch..! Je crois que tu ne nous as jamais donné un chapitre aussi triste et éprouvant. Je craignais que cela se produise , et malgré le fait que je m'y attendais , le choc a été rude. Scene terrible entre William et Buffy quand elle l'accuse et le rejette.. Son désespoir est si palpable. Quand à la solitude douloureuse de Buffy la nuit venue , elle est si triste. Tu me fais pleurer. Mais c'était magnifiquement écrit.

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September 04 2005 - 12:21PM: NoneAnonymous
Hooo je suis en larme. Totallement en larme. Boulverser. Troubler. Le coeur en miette. Quand Buffy a retrouver ça dans cette état, j'ai vriament eut peur qu'elle rejette tout sur William et ma peur c'est réalisé. Quand William pleure, sous la pluie, c'est une scène qui m'a vraiment atteint droit au coeur. J'avais l'impression qu'on lui arrachait violement son âme, son essence de vie. Et la fin du chapitre sur Buffy qui le réclame dans ses rêves. On voit qu'il est encré en elle maintenant. Je trouve ça dommage que tu ais perdu tout mes anciens commentaires ainsi que ceux des autres, mais sachez que les miens n'ont pas changer ^_^. Tu me donneras l'adresse de ce journal dont tu parles et j'ai déjà bien hâte au chapitre 21, qui j'espère, viendra me recoller le coeur. bizou

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September 04 2005 - 10:06AM: NoneAnonymous
I can already tell that I'm going to love this story. Fabulous start. Can't wait for more.

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September 04 2005 - 09:14AM: NoneAnonymous
Oh no... I feared it but it's another thing to now for sure - the bastard Parker raped Buffy! No wonder she changed her attitude and became "a cold hearted bitch" as the other may call her. Poor one. It's good that Spike stand by her. Loved the update - I hope you had fun! *hugs*

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September 04 2005 - 08:58AM: NoneAnonymous
excellent update keep them coming

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September 04 2005 - 08:57AM: NoneAnonymous
Hey Kimber, Seriously you're amazing I love all of your stories I also love (Love me for me) thats another great story you are one of my fav authors.....its kinda like your famous...LOL....Keep up the awesome work its amazing!!