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September 09 2005 - 12:48PM: NoneAnonymous
TRES BEAU chapitre , qui , comme l'a dit Olivia-luv , porte trés bien son nom . Magnifique description de la façon dont Buffy comprends ses erreurs. Elle est enceinte !! Voilà une nouvelle délicieuse , et j'ai tellement hâte qu'elle l'annonce à William. Et lui , que va t -il encore lui arriver, Oh je ne peux pas attendre !!!

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September 09 2005 - 12:46PM: NoneAnonymous
Il y a quelque chose qui me rend si trsite et inquiete de ce chapitre. Buffy qui pose tous ses espoirs sur le retour de William, qui lui est blesser, loin de ceux eux. Cela m'inquiète, mais je ne peux que penser que tout ira bien, après tout, ils se sont destinés non? William est boulversant dans sa manière d'agir et de penser. Sa nostalegie de son enfance qui fait sortir la pensée : C'est quoi son vrai bonheur? J'ai trouver ça tellement juste. Il est vrai qu'il avait toujours placer la base de son bonheur total à la réalisation de ce projet depuis la mort de son père et je crois que l'arriver e Buffy dans sa vie lui a montrer que le bonheur de son père qu'il cherchait lui-même a atteinde, n'avait aucun rapport avec son travail. Peut-être ai-je faux, mais je l'es perçu ainsi. Puis, Buffy. Elle qui mets tant d'espoir dans son retour. Elle planafie le bonheur d'etre deux comme une adolescente qui pratique sa signature de futur madame X. C'est adorablement touchant et tellement réjouissant de voir que finalement elle a compris. Sa réaction soudaine a été un peu déroutante, innatendu, mais le bienvenue. Bravisimo et bonne chance. Bisous. Kate

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September 09 2005 - 12:11PM: NoneAnonymous
Hi, You haven't updated in a while. Please say you are going to finish this, I love the piggy's and Buffy's outlook and want tom read more angel bashing. Thanks!!! 9/09/05

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September 09 2005 - 11:10AM: NoneAnonymous
WTF why did she push him away and get all emotional over it, also she slapped wat the hell she responded to the kiss, she didnt need to slap him. i really want them to get together i think that the belong together and that buffy should get over wat ever shes still holding on to and give spike antoher chance. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that they work throught this and get together and dawn and them become a family that would be so sweet. please update as soon as u cam, i cant wait to read tha next chapter and see wat happens between buffy and spike next thanx

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September 09 2005 - 11:06AM: NoneAnonymous
They are both so stubborn!! Makes it fun ...and irritating to read. :) More please! :)

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September 09 2005 - 10:12AM: NoneAnonymous
Oh Mac you made me giggle.....for vampire Spike knew more about loving someone then this Spike could ever dream of doing......he doted on his Dru and gave her WHAT SHE WANTED. Theirs was a mutual thing....it wasn't until she saw him covered with the slayer did things start to go wrong..... now this Spike reminds me more of how he used and abused Harmony. If he'd even attempted anything like this with Buffy the slayer...he would've been dust......LOL.....You are right about this Spike has pulled out how perverted he is and all about his wants and needs.....I can now see now how Dru's condition was overlooked by him....for he never really looked at Dru, just how she never could love him like she loved Angel. Angel in all his depravity was able to see Dru's crumbling reality and tried to save her.....tHe could see he wasn't the man for Buffy and let her go, now that to me does show a love and respect I never thought I'd see from Angelus. Spike with all his claims to love her like no other....well we are finding out what a selfish bastard he really is. Nothing he's done has been to win Buffy's trust....but to get into her pants, and bring her down to his level of sexual depravity.....how is it humanly healthy to do the things he's made her do and say the things she's said. His fetish with underage girl fantasies and wanting her to constantly call him Daddy is just not mentally heatlhy in my opinion. But I realize that I'm a minority in this opinion, and will deal with as I try and comfortably continue to read, keeping faith she will someone make this all right in the end. And I guess it also goes to show, we can all agree to disagree and hope she realizes we are only telling her the truth on how her writing makes us feel....and be honored that we are in fact having faith it will all work out in the end even as we grip our discontent on Spike's bad rude behavior. My hats off to her if she can bring Buffy through this not broken.....a few dents and cracks....well they've already be done and can't take them back, but honestly how much more can the girl take with him using sex, temper, and threats as a weapon and not break under the strain.........so yes, bring on the next chapter and see how much deeper Spike can dig his grave....or start to see the light........

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September 09 2005 - 10:00AM: NoneAnonymous
Another Gold Star??? YAY!!!, and about Spike and his lack of asking question, your are entirely right, no man in the world ask most of the time, so why would Spike bother, he really has issues hehehehe, I think he has a Zeus complex, he think he’s God and he can do as he pleases, as Buffy would say “ego much?” . . . and going to today’s update . . . Great chapter with Buffy finally doing something else beside thinking about what would happened and waiting for Spike, she really needed the distraction . . . again with Spike’s temper and Buffy’s resistance. At this point I just think Buffy is resisting just to keep the image and the pose; she wants him, she begs him, she has her release and then she comes back to the “you are beneath me”, I don’t know, but her attitude in this chapter, with the “please daddy” (again with the Yuck, ^__~) and then with the “nothing to get use to”, sounds familiar to me, much like season 6 and Buffy’s philosophy of please do me hard as long as nobody knows . . . and just to make a point, I’m not angry with Buffy for not giving up, but I just get the feeling that with so many mixed signs not only Spike is going to end up really confused, but also Buffy, it will get to a point that even she would not know what’s going on . . . as Hemingway said once “a man cannot be one to himself and somebody else with the outside world without, at some point, losing who he really is and mix them both”, so Buffy is in trouble and she needs to make up her mind, but also her heart, and she’s going to need a lot of time for that. As for Spike . . . well, I clap for him because he’s starting to control his temper, I really was expecting him to slap Buffy for her comment, even though he said she’s going to pay for it, he didn’t do anything to hurt her . . . yet. And oh boy! Spike seems like a big perv, always thinking of sex, how come that he is so turn on about a “working suit” . . . that’s the typical cliché for a man, the “school teacher” or the “school student”, and to think that are several very real guys that have that fantasy . . . I just simply could not think about any of my teacher in that way, that will be creepy, but again, if it’s an Spike teacher, I positively reconsider . . . I think that what Spike has is a Buffy fantasy, doesn’t matter if she’s a teacher, a student, a ballet dancer or a stripper; he just want her, plain an simple and this is what makes it interesting, you give us plenty of sceneries to dream about in the meanwhile the real action begins. I’ll never get tire to say this I LOVE YOU STORY AND THE WAY YOU WRITE, and also look forward to keep reading. Thanks for the new chapter and hope the update soon. Ash.

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September 09 2005 - 09:58AM: NoneAnonymous
Okay, you have to update immediately, because I CANNOT wait for the next chapter. Omigod. I love this story, it just keeps twisting and throwing out little scenes, little pieces of itself that let you really see inside the minds and souls of the people involved. I disagree with some of the others, I love this Spike, this is what vampire Spike would be if he were merely human but had the same sociopathic tendencies. I don't know where this goes next but wherever it is I want to go there and go there soon. You've caught the ambivilence and despair so perfectly. Her words are all she has now, to preserve her personality and keep from being sucked under and overwhelmed by his manipulations and it's getting her in trouble. But that's the price she pays for retaining her sanity and her sense of who she is. And the wanton - whore insult, that was excellent. That really is the problem when a woman is very responsive, they are accused of being a whore or treated like one, and it's one we still deal with today. That Spike throws that insult out at her in self-defense against her assertions that she is not pleased with his attentions is very understandable. No less difficult to bear, but understandable. You've got a good ear for human psyche and behavior, makes me wonder where you got so good at that. :-) Most folks don't see these hard truths quite so clearly as you seem to do, and it's making a magnificent difference in the way you draw these characters in your work. The depth is impressive. But please please please get the next chapter out soon because this cliffhanger is gonna make me go nuts. Thanks again! :-)

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September 09 2005 - 09:46AM: NoneAnonymous
Hey, sorry I havent reviewed in a while! I live where we got hit by hurricane Katrina. I just got power yesterday! I just finished reading 25 chapters! I loved them all!!! I cant wait to see what happens next , please update soon!!! I still love this story, so much!!! :) Dell

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September 09 2005 - 06:00AM: NoneAnonymous
Thanks for clearing up the misconceptions I made on my last review about Holland, the amulet and the spell activating the entire Slayer line. You really opened my eyes about things. I really liked the upbeat feel of this chapter. Can't wait to find out isn't in the cemetery anymore in 2030. Great story i'm really enjoying it!

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September 08 2005 - 04:45PM: NoneAnonymous
Love it and cam't wait for more!

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September 08 2005 - 03:04PM: NoneAnonymous
Oh, I love camping.......great chapter and at least now I know why they started piss testing horses. Ever stand in a test barn whistling like a jackass, waiting for a horse to pee? Love the story :)

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September 08 2005 - 03:03PM: NoneAnonymous
I really love this story. It's so. . . I dunno. You really captured the feeling of the period for me. I cant wait to read more!

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September 08 2005 - 03:03PM: NoneAnonymous
good update more please

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September 08 2005 - 03:02PM: NoneAnonymous
I liked the chapter even though I couldn't detect much Spuffy vibes going on yet. The Buffy and William interaction is very intense, i enjoy reading it so much.. Please update!

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September 08 2005 - 01:49PM: NoneAnonymous
Excellent!

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September 08 2005 - 01:49PM: NoneAnonymous
"‘Look at that lip. So soft and lickable, waiting for me to taste it." I was stuck on that line for a while cause I was imagining his lip, and I'll say this....YUM!! Great ficlet!!!

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September 08 2005 - 09:32AM: NoneAnonymous
Hmmm, that was amazing. How about a little kiss goodbye in the next chapter?

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September 08 2005 - 09:31AM: NoneAnonymous
Spike, for God's sake, just kiss Buffy!!! LOL (sorry Mac 1) I really do like the way this story just unfolds, each chapter, like a layer on a rose, tells it's own part of the tale. Poor Buffy, she'll crack soon, I'm sure. spuf

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September 08 2005 - 08:23AM: NoneAnonymous
The thought of Buffy dying (and later on Spike dying) still makes me sad. I hope the other Buffy and Spike can make sure that neither Buffy nor Spike have to die in the future.

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September 08 2005 - 01:15AM: NoneAnonymous
*sniff!* Chapitre tellement triste. La douleur de William et Buffy est evidente, mais ils semblent trop dependre de Joyce pour reprendre leur force. Je crois qu'il va falloir qu'ils fassent face a leur situation eux-memes, comme des adultes, sans l'assistance de Mme Summers...

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September 07 2005 - 08:07PM: NoneAnonymous
Course you should continue, Pet! It gets addictive writing, and the more reviews you get the more you'll find you want to write -Good luck! Jon, Nuke, Mick, Andy and Eddie - the Kings of Mercia

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September 07 2005 - 08:04PM: NoneAnonymous
Do we get to see spuffy in the next chapter? I'm looking forward to it. Great update!

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September 07 2005 - 07:39PM: NoneAnonymous
I have told you already that I love it, But I will tell you again and for all the others considering reading this, It is an AMAZING story. And you would be silly to not read it!!! It really is a good chapter honey and a good story overall!. If you want me to beta more let me know. I have the time!!!! Nikki xx

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September 07 2005 - 07:37PM: NoneAnonymous
Loved the dancing :) I wonder when Buffy will check what Angel is doing...