Great start! Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon!
I am interested in reading the rest!
i'm pretty curious about this spike... and joyce, is she a kind of higher being? love this first chapter... hope to read more soon!
Wow, totally new and interesting to boot! I really hope you post the other chapter, soon too. I can't wait to read more and it definitly sounds like you're havin' fun with it. Keep on writin'!
I'm very impressed with this story. You've created a world both foreign and plausible, and done the same with the characters. I like your drained and yet deeply moral Buffy, as well as your broken down but still recognizeable (on the inside, at least) Spike. Well done, and I'm looking forward to more.
Really enjoying the story.
AWESOME EXCELLENT READ MORE SOON,VERY SOON I HOPE LOVING THIS STORY ..THANK YOU MAGGIE
What a cruel girl Drusilla is! I hope she gets what she deserves! Poor Buffy...she's gonna drop soon if she doesn't take care of herself/ Update soon PLEASE!!
Night buffy,Night Spike????? Boy you just love this don't you.I gess I'm seeing this different then you,but you are the writer.But this is getting old.
as if there was any doubt befor but riley is a jerk. i understand that not training could weaken buffy but how did riely get so strong and her so weak. lt just seems a little off. could he be draining her power or is he on the drugs that walsh gave him ? anyway i could also just be underestemating the importance of a wok out. if thats the problem she sould start training again. hopefuly with spike. anyway can't wait to see what you came up with. plese update again soon you're doing a great job.
wow. awsome start. i like it. very original. can't wait for more. and is it just me or is hank kinda mean. hope that william and buffy meet soon.
i am truly loving the start of your story and can't wait to read when elizabeth and william finally meet! hopefully william will forget completely about cecily adams aka to stuck up to notice a hottie that is right in front of my face! PLEASE UPDATE SOON?
You've definitely grabbed my interest! Look forward to your updates. I especially like how you're portraying Buffy in this one.
Poor Spike... thinking Buffy will never choose him he searched his other friend.. alcohol. *sigh* And got captured. Buffy won't like that. But maybe she should have been clearer to Spike before.
that was just spike being spike so... why wonders? he still hasn't learnt the lesson... in more than 100 years! sometimes it's almost cute... now it's quite annoying. okay... can buffy kiss him for saving her life.... and then break his nose for getting drunk at the dumbest moment ever?
I just read the first two chapters. I don't read so much high school fics but I love the start of this one. Will try to read on!
Tss tss tss... Spike is really ... Do I dare to say it? Well: pathetic! Be an ass with the girl makes her see you, yes, but not in a good way... Hope he'll understand that soon ;)! I can't wait to see Buffy in the team, and when she will see who is in with her, no doubt it will be a great moment :)! And if she is a better swimmer than him, it would be so funny... Can't wait for the next update!
i loved that she finally confronted riley about his little "nothings" on the side! i am kind of disappointed that he wasn't reminded what a real slayer is. I was really hoping that he would get his ass kicked and handed to him! i am really LOVING your story and can't wait to read more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I love it great chapter I hope you dont think your bad a writting this stuff with Angel and Cordy cause if you do then you need some sense smacked into ya! LOL....Amazing as always!
I love the turn the story took in this chapter. Can't wait to read more. Fantastic update!
i also have a question.. does william in this story look like spike or wiilliam, like 1800s william? just wondering because you reffered to him as spike one place then william the other in the last chp. so yeah.! : )
that was an awweeessome way to end it ! im looking forward to more SOON!?! : D
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Good the Jesse was with Xander. So they had at last a witness. Xander is really an idiot. He is risking his job. Well, he's an idiot in love, that's why. But Buffy showed him, huh? :-D