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November 30 2005 - 03:31AM: NoneAnonymous
good update but i hope that she and spike get closer

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November 30 2005 - 03:27AM: NoneAnonymous
Great take off! Really promising story. Guess, there will be some Dru bashing in the future...
Update soon!

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November 30 2005 - 03:25AM: NoneAnonymous
I really don't know what to say. This fic is making me unable to formulate a clear thought for me to type up. I really like this

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November 30 2005 - 03:23AM: NoneAnonymous
I'm still behind reading *ducks head - and betaing too, I'm bad* but I'll start this one too. I know I'm bad. And I reread Babies Daddy in German :-D Uh-huh.. Dark fic? I'll try it.

Oh my - a really dark start and heartbreaking - Dawn died and Buffy's parents thinks it's her fault - but Dru didn't watch her. And Buffy broke. *reading on*

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November 30 2005 - 03:21AM: NoneAnonymous
Love it - Angel and Darla seems to be decent friends. We haven't meet Faith yet. And Spike as a stranger comes into the house and sees more then her parents? What a pity - for her parents. Dru seems so dislike Buffy anyway. Is she jealous of her? I don't know. But I love this one - and I promise to try to catch up with your other fic!

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November 30 2005 - 03:01AM: NoneAnonymous
Great start to this story. Interested to see where it goes. The writing is excellent. Very high quality (though a few typos do detract). I'll definitely be coming back for more.

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November 30 2005 - 02:58AM: NoneAnonymous
interesting story

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November 30 2005 - 02:57AM: NoneAnonymous
loved it like usual

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November 30 2005 - 02:56AM: NoneAnonymous
good so far but i wonder what happened to dawn?

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November 30 2005 - 02:51AM: NoneAnonymous
ohhhhhhh, poor thing.... i'm not even the middle child but i know how it is to be treated like that *hugs buffy*

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November 30 2005 - 02:47AM: NoneAnonymous
wicked cool love the emotion and it is really good, keep writing

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November 30 2005 - 02:42AM: NoneAnonymous
well.....damn. Wow!! Gosh!! Woah!! There are more words to describe this story but I'll just stick with these: great job!!! please post soon. wonder if spike had anything to do with this. hmmmm? pleae continue

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November 30 2005 - 02:40AM: NoneAnonymous
i love this amazing story and it's only the second chapter. dru is a bitch. joyce is a bitch and hank is a dickhead. loved it though. glad spike is seeing right through buffy's 'disinterested act'. maybe he can help fix her cuz she is way broken. please post soon. great job. loved. it.

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November 30 2005 - 02:37AM: NoneAnonymous
Ugh, and she hasn't run away from these assholes yet why? *rolls eyes*

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November 30 2005 - 02:36AM: NoneAnonymous
Oh, God! This chapter was hearbreaking, very well written and I just can't wait to find out what's happening now.

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November 30 2005 - 02:35AM: NoneAnonymous
great story. please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter.

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November 29 2005 - 11:35PM: NoneAnonymous
great story

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November 29 2005 - 11:34PM: NoneAnonymous
Who is Justin.......

She is a slut...LOL......hot spuffy here........and I guess it's common for the men to screw the girlies....LOL sine the Dean gets it often it would seem, LOL


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November 29 2005 - 11:32PM: NoneAnonymous
omg was that hot i luv it lol its an awesome story luv it luv it
luvs much

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November 29 2005 - 11:31PM: NoneAnonymous
Why is your Buffy talking like Faith? It's distracting me from enjoying the hot sex.

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November 29 2005 - 11:28PM: NoneAnonymous
Hello Mariah. I haven't read your fic yet, but will as soon as I hit the submit button.. Just had to comment on your statement "Life's to short to give a shit". I say that so much I might as well have it tattooed on my forehead. Signed: Moriah

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November 29 2005 - 11:26PM: NoneAnonymous
I loved it! I think you should add to it, as in continue it just cause I'm a 'need to know what happens next' person. lol

Personally, I like seeing Buffy more Faith-like in the agressive sense & isn't that the point of 'Fantasy'? You can make her be who you want.

I had to laugh at the 'Justin' slip tho. We're all here picturing Spike & the writer herself is off imagining some Justin guy. tsk tsk lol

Again, loved it! Great job!

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November 29 2005 - 11:25PM: NoneAnonymous
Hehee...why stop at nine inches. You should've just went all out and made him lucky 13. This is fantasy afterall. ;) Buffy IS a little slut, isnt' she? What the hell? Life's too fuckin' short to care. ;)

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November 29 2005 - 10:45PM: NoneAnonymous
i loved it, fun and freaky lol. One thing though, you dating a guy named justin or something cause you used his name instead of Spikes :) lol, good work!

Author's Response: i was thinking of my bf while i was writing this up so i might have typed his name there by mistake but its fixed now. now more justin lol glad you liked it!

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November 29 2005 - 10:44PM: NoneAnonymous
i loved it, fun and freaky lol. One thing though, you dating a guy named justin or something cause you used his name instead of Spikes :) lol, good work!