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December 19 2005 - 04:04AM: NoneAnonymous
Aha! Talking, if only jokingly, about being 'one of those couples', Buffy realised she's in love with him, and Spike had earlier come to the realisation that he COULD love her. So we've got the ingredients but being a Spuffy story we know having all the right pieces doesn't necessarily mean these two know how to make them fit. Maybe it's just the overdose of angsty stories I've been following but I'm thinking...this look like happiness has come too easy. Which then makes me suspect there's gonna be something nasty coming up for them. Will Faith make a play for Spike and Buffy misinterpret Spike's actions as reciprocating? Will Angel think he's automatically in for a second go and Spike misintrerpret Buffy's actions? Or is there something else you have planned perhaps that we can't even guess at? Oooh the suspense, the suspense LOL. Still following this with interest 8-)

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December 18 2005 - 08:26PM: NoneAnonymous
Does the Master have thrall or some other trick to program Spike? I hope Spike will realize where this came from and not run from Buffy! Great chapter. Thanks so much.

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December 18 2005 - 04:48PM: NoneAnonymous
Another great chapter! I can't get enough of this fic!

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December 18 2005 - 04:46PM: NoneAnonymous
Holland's squirming was fun to read. I like how much mileage you get out of the interregnum... it's a great plot mover. I'm so curious to find out if Buffy is gonna turn up at Homer's cabin. Good update. Can't wait to read more!

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December 18 2005 - 04:23PM: NoneAnonymous
Hi, just so you know, there's a 1000 word minimum requirement per chapter. You've just posted two really short segments, so I would suggest combining them, otherwise when the mods find this story, they'll delete it.

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December 18 2005 - 02:14PM: NoneAnonymous
Interesting start wonder where you're gonna take this.

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December 18 2005 - 10:25AM: NoneAnonymous
Some well-meaning teacher told you that punctuation and capitlizating names and sentence beginnings was irrelevant,didn't they? They were wrong. Please slow down long enough to maintain some basic grammatical structure, okay? The story idea is interesting but the grammar and punctuation is very distracting.

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December 18 2005 - 08:58AM: NoneAnonymous
Good so far, looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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December 17 2005 - 10:48PM: NoneAnonymous
I like the story. Honestly, since you started this fic, I remembered the Dollanganger saga, which I had read while I was in my second year of High School, so I read it again in just a few weeks. I love the way you're writing it because even if it's based on flowers in the attic, there're so many different things that it looks another story. So good job. I can't wait till your next update.

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December 17 2005 - 10:18PM: NoneAnonymous
YAY! I am so glad that you posted! OMG! William is 18 years old!!! I think that he knows that what he did was wrong! But I liked it! LOL! I hope we get more of that! :) I think that there mother is just going out and having fun and forgetting about her kids. I hope Dawn and Connor have a good christmas! Please let us have some good spuffy time! We need it! LOL! Loved the chapter! This is such an awesome fic but, I would like to know more about the whole family situation and whats going on. Please post soon! :) Lighter

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December 17 2005 - 10:15PM: NoneAnonymous
WL---

isnt will 16??

not 18....

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December 17 2005 - 09:50PM: NoneAnonymous
Heehee! I get the title now! lol

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December 17 2005 - 09:50PM: NoneAnonymous
this story is terrific!! thanx so much!! can't wait to see what happens next!

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December 17 2005 - 09:50PM: NoneAnonymous
*sigh* So Spike has to go to England.. therefore the title of the story, huh? Loved reading the chapter - thanks for the update - and have fun!

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December 17 2005 - 09:49PM: NoneAnonymous
Nice first online contact - so Buffy and William had fun exchanging mails... You're A/N? I would guess that he looks more like Spike then William *gg* *Goes on reading.*

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December 17 2005 - 09:48PM: NoneAnonymous
I'm so glad you posted a new story! I love it so far. Looking forward to more.

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December 17 2005 - 09:48PM: NoneAnonymous
Great chapter

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December 17 2005 - 09:47PM: NoneAnonymous
absolutely loved it

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December 17 2005 - 09:47PM: NoneAnonymous
Oooohhhh lovely chapter! See, I was right! William became Spike. I love it when stories do that. ;) Spike is just sexier.

I love your story, Allison... keep them coming!

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December 17 2005 - 09:46PM: NoneAnonymous
Great first meeting. I'm glad the date went so well. It's a shame William is moving but I like where the story is heading. Loved Anya's "test-drive" line. Great chapter. p.s. I hope you have a great birthay! :-)

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December 17 2005 - 09:45PM: NoneAnonymous
you deserve to take a test-drive with him


I agree!

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December 17 2005 - 09:45PM: NoneAnonymous
Forgot to add...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

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December 17 2005 - 09:44PM: NoneAnonymous
*sigh*
Guess I get what the tittle of this story means now.
Not fair..you meet the perfect guy and it can't go anywhere cause he's moving away!
Can't wait to see how you work this fic out..Really love it so far! : -D

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December 17 2005 - 09:43PM: NoneAnonymous
awwww how cute, im so happy that they liked each other and had a good time. i thought that william would look like spike and i was right, how cool. i LOVE this story a lot and am so happy that u update so quickly. i really hope that see each other again. also i hope that if spike does go to london that she follows him and that they get and stay together. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read the next chapter and see wat happens. thanx

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December 17 2005 - 09:39PM: NoneAnonymous
Noooo!!!! He can't move now! Although I guess you did warn us with the title. I loved your handling of the first encounter - the gawking and drooling was priceless! I'm sure I would do the same in that situation.

Have a GREAT birthday!