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July 07 2005 - 07:24AM: NoneAnonymous
Between you and me - I've got a thing for the "bad boys". So this version of Spike is right up my alley. However, miss Buffy isn't going to put up with it. I can only see two possible solutions to this dilema. Spike has to straighten up and fly right OR you can send the bad Spike to me!!! LOL I have been hooked on this story sonce chapter one. I feel that Saturday is much too long to wait - don't you? The tension has to be resolved and quickly. Keep up the great work and please consider updating sooner!!!! THANKS

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July 07 2005 - 07:18AM: NoneAnonymous
Yeah - Spike is feeling the attraction to Buffy - too bad she doesn't feel the same way (yet, I hope). Looking eagerly forward to the next part!

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July 07 2005 - 07:17AM: NoneAnonymous
love it please update soon please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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July 07 2005 - 07:16AM: NoneAnonymous
I love this story, plz post on saturday!!!

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July 07 2005 - 07:13AM: NoneAnonymous
The tension is excruciating... and, although I know this is going to be Spuffy eventually, I really am not liking Spike here at all. He appears not to care in the least about any woman apart from Dru. His callous indifference to the cries and state of Faith and Harmony - instigated at his direct instruction. His absolute certainty in his own riteousness and Buffy's guilt in what led to this chapters spanking. He's the epitome of Spike's Season Two Big Bad. I'll be interested to see how you make the transition of him to the redemptive man that Buffy would accept. If your writing skill and creative talent so far is any indication, it's going to be a beautiful thing to read. There are a couple of grammatical/typos that did distract a little in this chapter, e.g. the use of "...then..." instead of "than" (I assume the rule is same for American as English?) , and you have, "... him self..." when it should be, "himself" (spell checker can be a devil) Oh, and I'm actually dreading the return of Dru. Any chance you can have her run off into the sunrise with Gilbey?

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July 07 2005 - 07:07AM: NoneAnonymous
My oh my....well I guess Buffy good come to realize all he did was spank her....he could have whomped on her really good not caring where he hit her........I think ole Spike don't know it yet....but the girl is doing more then get to him, she's getting under his skin and making a b-line right to his heart.....and one day he'll set up on bed and go, "Oh Fuck!!!!" LOL.

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July 07 2005 - 07:04AM: NoneAnonymous
Wow - again! Poor Spike, Buffy is REALLY getting to him. What's a guy to do? How's he going to turn this one around? Just when things were looking promising...But I see you've promised smut is a'comin - hopefully not of the flashback kind - so something huge must be on the horizon. Still on the edge of my seat...ATB, Melissa

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July 07 2005 - 07:00AM: NoneAnonymous
Well, count me on my knees in pleading for the next chapter! Great update, I really detest Spike right now, however, I'm sure your wonderful writing can persuade me to 'love' him again! Luv, spuf

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July 07 2005 - 06:58AM: NoneAnonymous
Loved the angst. I can't believe he spanked her...lol. I can just feel the passion between them. PLEASE POST A NEW CHAPTER, PRETTY PLEASE God I can't believe I'm begging but your story is just that good. Keep up the good work and I have no doubt the smut will be all that and more. If its anything as descriptive as the foursome earlier in the story, l going to need a cigarette...lol Thanks for the update

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July 07 2005 - 12:39AM: NoneAnonymous
I like this revised version better. :) Excellent story. Eagerly awaiting the next update. :D

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July 06 2005 - 11:35PM: NoneAnonymous
Okay, their personal chemistry aside, doesnt it seem just a little porn star'ish for her to screw the pizza delievery man? lol, im kidding it was good.

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July 06 2005 - 11:31PM: NoneAnonymous
I like it. thought it was pretty good....And I hope you continue it!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I will.

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July 06 2005 - 11:31PM: NoneAnonymous
I like it. thought it was pretty good....And I hope you continue it!!!!!!!

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July 06 2005 - 09:38PM: NoneAnonymous
Aw, this was a cute story. I'm not a fan of family vacations either, but I did meet my Spike when I was in Europe a few years ago. It's just a shame we didn't manage to keep in touch. I'm glad they did and that he decided to move to Sunnydale. That's a devoted guy right there. I would be all for a sequel if you decided to do one. Just a suggestion=)

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July 06 2005 - 09:36PM: NoneAnonymous
That was like THE best story EVER!!!! it was sooo cute!!! i hope theres a sequel!!!!!!!

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July 06 2005 - 09:35PM: NoneAnonymous
She sooooo better not believe that Angel was the one that truly saved her. Spike gave up his soul for Buffy just as he fought to earn it for her. If Angel tries to take that glory from Spike ... I swear ... I'll stake him myself. {Growls} I look forward to the next update. This was an excellent one. I'm eager to see what happens when Buffy really awakens and what she is told.

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July 06 2005 - 09:25PM: NoneAnonymous
I like this revised version better. Please continue with it. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Please update soonand often

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July 06 2005 - 08:57PM: NoneAnonymous
Ok, I'm confused - last chapter Dawn was there daughter, this chapter she's Buffy's sister. Am I missing something?

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July 06 2005 - 08:48PM: NoneAnonymous
Very sweet. I really enjoyed it. Luv, Spuf

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July 06 2005 - 08:47PM: NoneAnonymous
Oh so sweet......and I'm picturing now them taking the kids and showing them this is where mommy met daddy and she converted him over to the otherside.........

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July 06 2005 - 08:42PM: NoneAnonymous
ACK! It's over?!?! *Cries* I liked reading this everyday! It was fun! Not to mention really really good!! It was a good ending... I just want more! *Pouts*

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July 06 2005 - 08:41PM: NoneAnonymous
aww i loved it

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July 06 2005 - 08:39PM: NoneAnonymous
Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this story. It was really sweet. I wish I met guys on the vacations I go on.

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July 06 2005 - 08:39PM: NoneAnonymous
Incredible, i absolutely loved it and cant wait to read your next fic. Would you be nice enough to email when its posted? My email is boondockbitch@hotmail.com, id really love it if you could find the time. Hey in a sense you did meet someone there right? Maybe not in real life but in your imagination and it inspired an incredible story. Great job again......by the way, dreams come true, maybe next time you go :)

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July 06 2005 - 08:36PM: NoneAnonymous
This was a great fic to read and I am really glad it had a happy ending!