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July 14 2005 - 06:10AM: NoneAnonymous
Had to know the Faith thing was coming. . but nooooooo. . . she's soo gotta realize soon, because this is killing me. Keep up the good work. I'm really glad I started reading this story.

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July 14 2005 - 06:01AM: NoneAnonymous
Great chapter - I'm really enjoying this fic! I'm so glad that medchemgirl flame review didn't stop you from updating this fic or get you too down I hope ( I saw the review when I was reading a couple of the other reviews for the last chapter ). Can't wait for more of this great fic, as soon as you're able to update. And to medchemgirl: there is such a thing as fiction, F-I-C-T-I-O-N!!! Just because there's no detention in college doesn't mean that we can't pretend for the sake of a fictional fanfic. Your review for the last chapter made it soundas though non of us other reviewers knew that there was no detentionin college, a fact which almost all, if not all of us are aware of... I'm seriously curious as to why you would feel the need to write such a review about a fic like this!!!

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July 14 2005 - 05:56AM: NoneAnonymous
I have to agree with the masses on this one. Try one of the beta threads and get someone to proofread this for you. It has some fairly major grammar pitfalls, and a good beta could help you out. Also the premise of this story is really bad, I am not flaming but there are no detentions in college. You are paying for your education they could care less whether you attend or not. You are an adult and as such are left to your own devices. The premise seems more to junior high and or early high school, and I think changing this would generate more interest in the story. Because I have to agree that in having mistakes in the premise, readers are put off and think that you have no idea what you are talking about. Plus if you have a premise that you aren't all that familiar with (such as college) do a little background research. This will allow you to have some semblance of authority in your writing to portray to the reader. I hope you take this advice to heart and just don't delete it because it isn't a (this is fabulous, write more review) because constructive criticism when taken to heart will strengthen your writing. And if you can't take criticism then you really need to step back a little and see why it upsets you so much (college and a good grammar instructor in high school/junior high) will help to instill the need for proofreading. Otherwise most of the time you'll end up eating the grade. I won't be reading this further as the poor grammar currently makes it to hard to read and follow. But I look forward to seeing changes and growth in your writing.

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July 14 2005 - 05:55AM: NoneAnonymous
Thanks for the update. However, I am horrified that Spike would fall in love with Faith in the alternate universe. I hope there won't be obvious Spaithness I don't know if I could stand it.

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July 14 2005 - 05:52AM: NoneAnonymous
ARGH!! That wasn't very nice of you, but that's ok. I absoutley love this story. It just keeps gettin' better. It's kinda nice to see Buffy forced to see the way thing could have been, and how much Spike and the others really mean to her. Keep it up!

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July 14 2005 - 05:49AM: NoneAnonymous
No No NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. i knew that was going to happen!!!! that'll teach buffy to treat spike like shit. keep up the great work. i love this story. loved it. LOVED. IT. post soon. great job.

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July 14 2005 - 05:46AM: NoneAnonymous
So the good thing is - Buffy wanted to replace her. But it took her a while to ask about Spike. And yet he was on her list of things left to her.
But the last one: Only it wasn’t the chip that really changed him here It was Faith. Well, the thought of it makes me kinda ill...Oh - I read through it when I hafta - but i hate the thought. There's a reason I don't read S/Faith fics. And won't do in the future.

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July 14 2005 - 03:23AM: NoneAnonymous
Loved the ending... hell, I loved the whole story. You're a great writer... can't wait to read more FF by you... ;oP

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July 13 2005 - 11:24PM: NoneAnonymous
It was very uplifting that after reliving such a horrible memory Buffy still listened to her heart and trusted in her love for Spike. Great chapter!

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July 13 2005 - 11:22PM: NoneAnonymous
And what a story it is...glad she stopped and listened, though I can imagine a memory like that would be difficult.

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July 13 2005 - 11:21PM: NoneAnonymous
I like this story

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July 13 2005 - 11:20PM: NoneAnonymous
i'm glad buffy didn't bolt after she had that dream. it's a good thing she wanted to tallk about it. i really love this story. post soon. can't wait for more. keep up the great work.

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July 13 2005 - 11:18PM: NoneAnonymous
nice chapter, that was pretty heavy, bringing that memory back after their first time. They were both pretty fucked up in season6, but atleast this buffy is mature enough to know that it was both their faults; see ya

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July 13 2005 - 10:22PM: NoneAnonymous
Okay, Buffy/Riley end soon?

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July 13 2005 - 10:21PM: NoneAnonymous
Great update......Spike was a jerk in the beggining...But now I'm starting to feel sorry for him....Not so much for Riley cause I think he'll be fine maybe alittle heart broken but he'll be okay....But I'm still waiting for Buffy to kick harm's ass.....Loved the chapter....

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July 13 2005 - 10:20PM: NoneAnonymous
Great chapter - very cute to see Buffy and Spike starting to get along! Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

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July 13 2005 - 10:19PM: NoneAnonymous
more plz i love it its great!!!!!! ;)

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July 13 2005 - 10:18PM: NoneAnonymous
Great so far, I can't wait to see where it goes

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July 13 2005 - 10:17PM: NoneAnonymous
Buffy is so sweet to Riley, he should trust her more, the way he's putting himself down insnt attractive and i think Buffy would get fed up of it if it continues....hint hint lol :) Great job and i cant wait for the next update. Linz

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July 13 2005 - 10:16PM: NoneAnonymous
good update

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July 13 2005 - 10:15PM: NoneAnonymous
Well - I hope the Riley thing will end soon - the rest will come ;-) Good to see Buffy and Spike are able to get along very well. *smile*

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July 13 2005 - 10:14PM: NoneAnonymous
atleast buffy isn't in complete denile. keep up the great work. this story is great. i really love what you're doing with it. post soon. can't wait for more

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July 13 2005 - 10:13PM: NoneAnonymous
well at least she has admited that its going to end! Great chapter! I would love to see some of Spike friends come in and make fun of him in front of Buffy, see how he like it!

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July 13 2005 - 04:57PM: NoneAnonymous
I'm sorry I've have to stop reading this story if she's pregnant. Thers's nothing cute about teen-age pregnacy. Sorry that's just my feeling. I loved the story up to now though.

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July 13 2005 - 03:58PM: NoneAnonymous
I love love love it! First off, I love the story, but when Buffy inevitably breaks it off with Riley (or vice versa, whatever) I might actually feel sorry for him, becaus he seems like a much nicer guy in your fic than in many others, and the show. Secondly, I love how frequently you update. You must have a lot of this written already, because there's no way you could possibly write a chapter or two a day... and if you do, I'm amazed with you. Keep it up, please!